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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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0 posted 2001-01-03 03:26 PM



Spirits Unite as One
By Richard Maxfield
7-23-2000

In the forest green
Lush growth so thick
Life of heavens beauty
Ripened for my pick

Through the swirling mist
Adorned in glowing light
I see an elegant vision
My heavenly delight

Shrouded in silken robe
Of royal scepter blue
Delicate bare feet
On green grass of dew

Long flowing hair
On soft shoulders lay
Dream of my nights
Reality of my day

Roses blush red
In her female grace
Flowers bow their hear
To her stunning face

Voice soft and sweet
Music to my ears
Laying in my arms
Calms all my fears

Come to me my love
I’ll meet you half way
Show me your love
Forever and a day

Eternity in love
Only you and I
Spirits unite as one
Souls set free to fly


Live like there is a tomorrow.

© Copyright 2001 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2001-01-03 03:31 PM


HHHhhhhhhhhmmmmmmmm.... soulmates dancing on the wind if time?   Beautiful write and a plea that I would think any lady would have a hard time ignoring.
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2001-01-03 03:31 PM


maxtec1,
this is soo cool your spirit was united with your muse to write this one. Stunning
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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Canada
3 posted 2001-01-03 03:43 PM


With words of romance flowing from his pen his lady love with join souls with him. Wonderful, my friend, I pray you find the fulfillment of your dreams. Much love from me to you.


Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
4 posted 2001-01-03 03:43 PM


Richard.....
    I love the style you write
    you entice such a dream
    like a whisper in the night
    such soft words & theme
    

Victoria
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5 posted 2001-01-03 05:00 PM


lovely writing as always rich..

               ~V~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
6 posted 2001-01-03 08:49 PM


Thank you my passions friends for all the comments over the past few weeks.
Love and light,
Richard

KokoStewartKoomoa
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii
7 posted 2001-01-03 08:56 PM


I agree ..I just adore your style and the way you express yourself so gracefully and romantically. This was an awesome poem.(but then, if you didn't doan awesome one,I'd be very surprised smiles ..Koko

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko



maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
8 posted 2001-01-03 09:05 PM


Thank you KOKO.
Love and light,
Richard

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