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Open Poetry #11

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-03 02:18 PM

if

if i could hide within the forest of your mind
i would stand beside your tree of memories
i would pick a fruit
and experience it again

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-03 02:24 PM

Whoops...this likes me!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-03 03:11 PM

I loved the style of this one...simplicity to convey much in a few short words. And I do understand loving someone so much, that you'd want to know everything about them. But I can't help thinking? God help the person who eats of the fruit of MY memory tree! Great job with this.

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

3 posted 2001-01-03 03:37 PM

"IF" I had wrote this I would be ever so proud. Loved it dear.
Love and light,
Richard

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

4 posted 2001-01-04 01:13 AM

very nice piece Slick,
Rich

Greg28
New Member

since 2000-06-30

Posts 4

5 posted 2001-01-04 07:41 AM

This one is one to remember... Thanks 1SL
~G~

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

6 posted 2001-01-04 07:46 AM

I love poems like this one, not one word too much. thank you for this poem

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