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Winds of Change
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Winds of Change |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
We... float on the air of uncertainty you- anchored in your beliefs I- fluff that blows here and there you offer hands that are unsteady each grasp collapses & I am lost once more You ride the winds of whatever with ease, even expertise I merely die a little more, cry a little more despairing forever... We continue to float on the air of uncertainty You- anchored in your beliefs I- fluff caught in a tornado unable to hold on no longer... |
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Stan Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 120Inland Empire Southern California |
Hello Tiersdin, Thanks for your reply to my post today. You are sweet Your poem here speaks of dispair and dreams blown away But there are still many warm loving arms in this world Let the winds of change not change your optimism I wish a new happiness for you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You ride the winds of whatever with ease, even expertise I merely die a little more, cry a little more despairing forever... ============= very expressive emote here Tiersdin ... perfect blend of metaphor and emotion I related to this all too well ... well done take care jm Am I loved by my words Will my vows weather the tide Bended knees can forsee all the rhythms of life And a heart can be held without pride ~Vante |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Stan,, words of encouragement are always so very welcome. *smiles* Janet Marie, I am sorry that you could relate to this poem. That means that you have experienced such pain. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me, you are greatly appreciated... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} [This message has been edited by Tiersdin (edited 01-03-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Definitely substance, not fluff here... *S* Well done! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You write too well here to be much of a fluff. You've portrayed the mood of your situation very well ...I enjoyed the write ...take care ethome |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Suthern, I really appreciate your comment... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you, Ethome, I'm glad that you enjoyed the poem and thank you for your kind words, means a lot... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
lost love is almost so sad...you have expressed your feelings quite well. ((((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
You ride the winds of whatever with ease, even expertise I merely die a little more, cry a little more despairing forever... I agree no fluff here but well written poetry, enjoyed the read. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Charisma & Brian, Thank you both for you kind words... *smiles* -Tier{Robin} |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Robin..nicely written..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you Victoria, glad you liked... -Tier{Robin} |
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