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DYME
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since 2000-07-29
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0 posted 2001-01-03 01:17 AM

Midnight                    **6/00**

The hands on the clock
Move like your hands on my body
The steam that rises
As we bathe in rosepetals
This moment is everlasting
And satisfying to my soul
Soon the petals are dry
And the candles burn out
I then wake up from my dream
Only to see midnight

DYME


NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-01-03 08:39 AM

DYME,
Interesting metaphor in your write.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.
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