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Charisma
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0 posted 2001-01-02 08:18 AM




Lovers Moon

Peeking through the clouds
spreading her romantic light
velvet lovers moon
shining with her gentle face
tender over lovers path.


Charisma


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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-01-02 08:25 AM


Charisma,
what a stunning way to satrt the new year both in write and graphic.
write on
Kethry


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2 posted 2001-01-02 02:23 PM


Charisma~
One of my favorite topics - the moon in any shape, form or fashion.
Thanks for sharing, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2001-01-02 02:32 PM


Charisma......
Loved this!!  And I have only seen a moon like that once, at what I call the 'end of the world', in Dutch Harbor, Alaska. It looked exactly like the graphic here!! Thank you........this brings back some very wonderful memories to start the new year!!  


Write on!
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4 posted 2001-01-02 07:20 PM


Kethry: thank you for your always kind reply's...love to have them from you.

Marge: I am glad that you love the topic...and yes the moon is one of my favorites too...in all her mystic

Sunny1 : it's my pleasure to give you some memories back.....I think that you have seen one of the most wonderful moments of the moon...rare moment.....wish that I was there too..

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5 posted 2001-01-02 07:44 PM


Charisma,
This has it all, you are so very special. Beautiful.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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6 posted 2001-01-02 07:54 PM


Lovely Tanka and graphic.  Beautifully done.

Poeminister

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O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
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7 posted 2001-01-02 09:24 PM


Daniel: thank you for your charming words...  

poeminister: thank you for reading...and your lovely reply  

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8 posted 2001-01-03 10:44 PM


nice one  
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9 posted 2001-01-04 03:41 AM


I am going to have to learn these Tankas.  You make them so beautiful and the topic of this one is for sure one that I love.......................the challenge btw was for the men this time to pay tribute to you wonderful ladies and you know I had to do that one.
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10 posted 2001-01-04 03:50 AM


Mark: I know that you would write wonderful Tanka's, without any doubt, I know that my friend
and about the challenge....well ladycat pass me the challenge too, to write about the men of passions....so I need some magic now.

((hugs))
Charisma

Beki: thank you for your nice comment


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11 posted 2001-01-04 03:54 AM


Charis~
this is so beautiful
lovely Tanka indeed

Tracie~


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It is the harmony of the universe



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12 posted 2001-01-04 08:24 PM


Tracie: I am so glad that you love this tanka....thanks for your lovely comment.
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Very beautiful, and I am so in love with the moon, this is perfect to me.
Sandra

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14 posted 2001-01-05 06:54 AM


Catalinamoon: I am so glad that you love it....
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15 posted 2001-01-05 08:28 PM


when i was young, it seemed like the moon was my guardian angel as it seemed to follow me around everywhere i went...

nice tanka..the moon does hold a special place in our hearts, yup?

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16 posted 2001-01-06 05:31 PM


Kaile: have you noticed that too, I had always that same idea....still can enjoy a bright night with the moon and stars above...yeah she have something specials indeed.
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