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Twinkle, Twinkle, Emerald Star (for JM and Friend)
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Twinkle, Twinkle, Emerald Star (for JM and Friend) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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Twinkle, twinkle, emerald star I know you are not very far search the skies for peace of mind reflection of you in my eyes... shades of you in every write with every verse so much more bright... The healing green of heart's release... your soul forever in my keep... Twinkle, dance, my emerald star, I know exactly where you are for every word you wrote, caressed, forever am I in your bless, and here you are within my heart togetherness-- a dance of rest. *Happy Birthday...I thank you, Devante' for the gift of Janet Marie...* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very enjoyable poem. I couldn't help but think of my daughter as her birthstone is the emerald. She twinkles in my heart. |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
serenity...How sweet and lovely for Janet..She will love this, I'm sure.. A lovely tribute for two very special people...You did this so well!!! ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Yes! she will indeed love this, and thank you for this wonderful gift you have given here! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Dear Seren what a beautiful write hon and yes I agree thank-you DeVante' for the gift of Janet Marie much love to you and Janny Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful tribute Celeste and a well deserved one and you penned it with such kindness and love....take care....ethome |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is a beautiful tribute to both...well done Serenity... |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
very beautiful and well versed. I loved it. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Se'en beautiful tribute, well done! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
search the skies for peace of mind reflection of you in my eyes... shades of you in every write with every verse ==================== Twinkle, dance, my emerald star, I know exactly where you are for every word you wrote, caressed, forever am I in your bless, and here you are within my heart togetherness-- a dance of rest. ================== do ya know how cool you are  oh me twin ... thank you baby ... this is SO PERFECT cuz its so you ... written in this "Sen style" that is so classically you. this is beautiful baby ... like a butterfly lullabye ... and it does give me peace ... and its grace lets me know that you too, now have danced with a butterfly thank you Sen, for this...but most of all for being you ... and being you is being way cool with a side of sweet see ya in the mirror baby *winkiewinkie* love ya me twin me ********* ~On The Sea~ Vertical Horizon No fog clear in the moonlight The stars shine so bright now's the time I close my eyes - soft wind touch my face Cool sand upon the place where I once kissed you And held you close Now I will reach for the stars Because Oh my love, that's where you are Though the storms of black night rage on I still see your face I still feel your lips on mine And though my heart feels all alone without you I still hear you sing to me I still hear your voice on the sea Sprayed across my heart and hers Danced butterflies in the wild This angel, this woman , who loves me with the innocence of a child. ~DeVante~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this is a wonderful tribute...and penned with love.....loved reading it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful piece of your heart you show here my friend for two very special people. I know how this one was recieved by JM and let me tell you she loves you to pieces for it. Something about walking there on her lips I believe.LOL You honor her in this tribute well and it goes to show the depth of your friendship with her. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Enjoyed it  |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very sweet. I enjoyed the read. Love and light, Richard |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's really beautiful... what a nice tribute and gesture to JM!!! (hehe... wanna hear something funny? at first i thought it said "twinkietwinkie".... lol... as in JM's *winkiewinkie*... geesh... forgive me... still getting over the holidays... is it over yet??? LOL... ) anyway... great writing, k!!! i love it!  (and i'm sure janetmarie does !!) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thank to all, but especially my girlie!!! Anything you want, you got it...love ya baby. |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very sweet |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
**tears in my eyes S'en** This is beautiful...you've been touched on this one...by the wings of a jade green butterfly...Love you my friend!! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
A touching and most fantastic one here O Serene one, my friend... Oh! how much I have missed coming here to play... Thanks for your writing... regards, sudhir |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This is just beautiful, Serenity...I enjoyed every word. |
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