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I Read Your Words
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I Read Your Words I read your words on a screen and I believed Thought my heartache would be relieved They touched on the very essence of me You supported me in loves stormy sea Your love was real I know that was true And it went because others love you too I waited for you to respond to this loves gift I wanted your spirit to soar, climb, to lift And although it did you still wanted more So take back your love and go and soar For I can remember and hold this dream And use the memories to fuel loves theme Your words were like an incantation a spell So professionally you rang my hearts bell My eyes only had to read there your name And my heart was on alert to play a game You'd capture me with a celestial phrase There I was darting around your loves' maze I'm giving you my thanks for a lesson taught For a least I had a taste of what I sought And heaven or paradise is a place I've seen The next time I'll say to heaven I've been And the lover who follows my giving heart Will find that from heaven he's not far apart Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Take your love and go soar? ROFL!!! You tell 'em, Marsha. ANYBODY who treats YOU badly is an evil dog (and you can tell him I said so!!!) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
How dare he toy with your feelings. I do like how you put into words your hurt and how you healed from it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ You've got more love in your heart to soar elsewhere. You go girl ! Gotta love your umph ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
he was NO gentleman.... "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I am starting to discover to my dismay there are many men this game seems they like to play the hearts of all the women they collect with glee while we sigh believing words that trap a heart once free *sigh* my heart bleeds for you dear one. Much love and hugs to you from me. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Sweet heart I feel your pain. You pen your feelings so well. Hang in there. Love and light, Richard |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
bubbles...what did i miss while my computer was fritzing...  this is a wonderful write of a lesson learned..you recover your heartache with such grace.. big hugs..'dee'< !signature--> "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-02-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am just relieved they weren't mine...lol... and winks to me Marsha... and it IS difficult...methinks sometimes the ladies should start a "dead poet's society"--poets are safer to love in the grave....but it's ALL very haunting, nonetheless. Love to you lady, watching you grow here..hugs. |
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John R Member
since 2000-12-14
Posts 141Toledo OH |
Loved it Marsha. Sometimes the game is played and the stakes are high. A broken heart is a risk we take. If a dream touches us, it exists to us as anything else that touches us. John |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, you played a game you could not win did no-one say "do not begin" you lost your heart and that's a shame how could you not know 'twas just a game the pain you're feeling is so deep but your heart will not always weep you'll go on, you have the power growing stronger every hour in your write you show your soul it won't be long till again you're whole until that day comes around just keeping writing to passions ground. Write on, be strong Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
'Deer, you are such a sweet dear an aside...... Hey you! soaring man, 'Deer says you're an evil dog' Thank you 'Deer,  and if it happens again, (What do I mean if, I know it will because I have no subtelty at all. I am as trusting as a kitten as about as wise!) So when it happens again, I'll tell them to report to you for disiplin training. Take care love Mushy inot2B, it's my fault love, I was as is always the case a sitting duck. I really ought to have a keeper, Kari's offered she's a keeper. Thank you love! Take care Mushy Margie girl, that is quite right I've got plenty of umph! In fact it's the umph that gets me into trouble. Thank you love Take care Mushy Kathleen love, I never meet gentlemen, there's only Doctors aka slippery rats, and Consultants, smooth and wealthy rats. Thank you Take care Mushy Karen love, Oh yes indeed, I learn one day, to look before I leap Take care love, and hugs back to you. Mushy Richard love, thank you kindly, it is much appreciated. I'm holding on by my fingernails, but I'm still holding on Take care Mushy Dee love, I've missed you, it's another example of my hope triumphing over experience, you know what an optimist I am. Take care kid Bubbles Kari love, Thanks sweetie, as always thanks little bit difficult to wave my flag but I'm still holding it up. Take care kid Majestic Marsha Serenity, thank you very much love, it's okay love, 'Deer says he'll teach them the difference between life and love. Well I think that's what he meant. Take care as always Mushy John R, Thank you, I know, the great game, sometimes I find it difficult to remember the rules. Take care Mushy Marsha Kethry love, That love should be posted in it's own right. As I say all the time, thank you lord for sending me friends. Fly high, fly free, and always always write your words where I can them see. Love and slushy stuff Slushy Mushy Me Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
fly my friend. . . for one will come to help you soar again. . . wonderful love. . .  --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, thank you, I know, well my head knows, and I will get my heart to know too. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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