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Loneheart
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0 posted 2001-01-01 02:12 PM



Lost in distant thoughts of passions quest
I think of thee
In my thoughts you are there in lace and velvet
Your fragrant aroma lightly caresses my mind
Enticing the very essence of my soul.
Mine eyes drink in thy beauty liken unto a sweet wine
With much desire shall I embrace all of thy longings
with kisses, prolonging and unhurried.
Delicately given with sensual sensitivity,
Thy gentle touch caresses mine heart as no other before thee.
You are my soul's delight my alluring ecstasy.
Your sweet innocence beckons me into a world of
Wondrous pleasures of whispers and gentle thoughts
Where lovers dwell
Know ye not sweet maid my heart was already thine?
My soul I would have gladly pledged unto thee
But alass my love except it ye could not.
With a saddened heart I bid thee farwell my alluring Goddess
In my heart and dreams ye shall always be.
Because forget thee I cannot.

Written By Loneheart
Come hear my words at http://i.am/Loneheart


Loneheart

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Denise
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1 posted 2001-01-01 02:54 PM


Sad yet beautifully penned!

Denise

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2001-01-01 03:34 PM


This is so very beautiful and haunting, and I hope you don't mind that I've placed it in my library for candlelight reading...thank you...

brian madden
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3 posted 2001-01-01 03:53 PM


i have to agree with Denise
and Karilea, a beautiful and haunting poem.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2001-01-01 04:17 PM


Loneheart I can always count on you to inspire me for romantic poetry,what a way to start the new year with thy lovely poem!!!!
Your poetry always leaves it mark across thy heart!!!

Loneheart
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5 posted 2001-01-02 08:32 PM


Maybe I should come by more often with such nice replys thank you my friends one and all
PS. Heart you need to update your homepage tryed leaving a note many times but cant get your links to work
As always
Thy Friend and Servant
                     Loneheart

Charisma
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6 posted 2001-01-02 09:03 PM


this is sad..but wonderful penned, right from the heart....well done.
((warm hugs))
Charisma

Irish Rose
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7 posted 2001-01-02 09:06 PM


This poem....oh my goodness, that's the way uh huh uh huh I like it, uh huh uh huh, that's the way I like it!!!!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


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8 posted 2001-01-02 09:06 PM


This poem....oh my goodness, that's the way uh huh uh huh I like it, uh huh uh huh, that's the way I like it!!!!!!!!< !signature-->
my record is stuck tonight.......
"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

   Kathleen





[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 01-02-2001).]

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