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ethome
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0 posted 2001-01-01 09:45 AM



As the years pass by like running tides
you're still like a dream from above.
Like a moonlit room on a honeymoon
you bring out the magic in love.

As the winds blow by under winter skies
hand in hand we're warm like a glove.
And storms move on to golden dawns
and you bring out the magic in love.

As birds fly by on a southward ride
in the clouds rolling by above,
the old grows new I'm still with you
as you bring out the magic in love.

As years fly by my heart stays high
like a child at play in the sun.
Like a merry-go-round full of happy sounds
you bring out the magic in love.


A little love song to bring in the positive aspect of the new year....ethome

© Copyright 2001 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
catalinamoon
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1 posted 2001-01-01 09:52 AM


Very nice way to start New Years Day. Thanks for the positive outlook, you know I needed it  
The poem is beautiful, and the thoughts even more so.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-01-01 10:01 AM


P T love this is MAGIC, utterly what I needed to read. Thank you so much, as always it is superb, and wonderful, and its soft and comforting too.
Take care kid  
               Mushy
                  
Thank you x


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-01-01 10:02 AM


"the old grows new I'm still with you
as you bring out the magic in love."
=====================
Everything you do is POSITIVE
your a smile waiting to happen.
and you KNOW I am digging this...
the repetative lines sing in perfect harmony with your rhyme ...
very cool E-babes....but then you always are
Happy New Year to you to Van-Eric  
love ya
jm


Brand New Day
Van the man

When all the dark clouds roll away
And the sun begins to shine
I see my freedom from across the way
And it comes right in on time
Well it shines so bright and it gives so much light
And it comes from the sky above
Makes me feel so free makes me feel like me
And lights my life with love

Chorus:
And it seems like and it feels like
And it seems like yes it feels like
A brand new day, yeah
A brand new day oh

I was lost and double crossed
With my hands behind my back
I was longtime hurt and thrown in the dirt
Shoved out on the railroad track
I've been used, abused and so confused
And I had nowhere to run
But I stood and looked
And my eyes got hooked
On that beautiful morning sun

Chorus

And the sun shines down all on the ground
Yeah and the grass is oh so green
And my heart is still and I've got the will
And I don't really feel so mean
Here it comes, here it comes
0 here it comes right now
And it comes right in on time
Well it eases me and it pleases me
And it satisfies my mind



Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2001-01-01 10:10 AM


"As birds fly by on a southward ride
in the clouds rolling by above,
the old grows new I'm still with you
as you bring out the magic in love."

Ahhhh ... so positively inspirational this New Years morn, beautifully written Ethome, just lovely!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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5 posted 2001-01-01 10:26 AM


Ah Ethome, no better gift could there be, than a song sung in poetry...beautiful...

Sven
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6 posted 2001-01-01 11:07 AM


this my friend, is wonderful. . .

you're great!!!  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


maxtec1
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7 posted 2001-01-01 11:37 AM


I loved this. It left me all warm and fuzzy. I will not be alone next new years I will have a lady to hold and romance. WELLL MAYBE lol
Love and light,
Richard

HopeS
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8 posted 2001-01-01 11:53 AM


Most beautiful
Love music to ears
Forever love true
Happy New years
Hope

BloomingRose
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9 posted 2001-01-01 01:30 PM


Ah... the magic of love.
What a beautiful song of poetry you bring to us this new years day.
Deb

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10 posted 2001-01-01 01:36 PM


beautifully written ethome..and HAPPY NEW YEAR to you and yours..HUGS

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



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11 posted 2001-01-01 01:39 PM


Ethome
A beautiful write my friend.

Lady Lightning
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12 posted 2001-01-01 01:54 PM


Aww Ethome...
You made me sing this afternoon...
Yes, I liked this...I did..  
My first read today and I go on my way with a smile...Thank you!!
~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

Martie
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13 posted 2001-01-01 02:04 PM


A beautiful sweet love poem, my friend True...makes me smile, it does..thank you.
A Romantic Heart
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14 posted 2001-01-01 04:23 PM


I can't resist...I have to do a quote from one of HEARTs songs(female band from the 70's and 80's)..HE's A MAGIC MAN!!! so is your poetry, magically written to put a glow in ones heart!!!!HAPPY NEW YEAR!!! THANKS FOR SHARING YOUR MAGIC!!!
Poeminister
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15 posted 2001-01-01 05:04 PM


"And storms move on to golden dawns"

ethome--I like this muchly.  Beautiful writing.  
Happy new year!

Poeminister

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16 posted 2001-01-01 05:27 PM


wonderful way to start this new year....love this song.

Happy new year my friend.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

ethome
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17 posted 2001-01-01 09:48 PM


Thank you catalinamoon for the response much appreciated...ethome

Marsha I'm glad this is what you needed to read and I hope it helps....ethome

JM thanks dear poet pal.... I always love your replies and I really love your latest... thanks for the positive word....ethome

Kit I thank you for the inspirational words and thanks for reading....ethome

Karilea always good to sing a song in poetry glad you enjoyed...ethome

Thanks Sven for the kind words always appreciated....ethome

Richard I'm sure you won't be alone next new years, especially the way you write beautiful love poems...ethome

Thanks Hope for the short but sweet verse... ethome

Thank you Blooming Rose for the fine comments on the musical aspect of this...ethome

Thank you so much Victoria for taking the time to read and the wishes.....ethome

Seymour glad you could drop in to take a read ....ethome

Lady L thanks I'm glad I got you singing a little on this new year's day....ethome

Martie it's always a pleasure to hear from one of my back up singers...glad you liked it .....ethome

Romantic Heart I remember the song well and I thank you for such a wonderful comparison comment.... ethome

Poeminister thanks for the kind comments much appreciated....ethome

Charisma I'm so glad you liked the song and that it did what it was supposed to do ....ethome


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18 posted 2001-01-01 11:03 PM


Love, magic and hope in lyrical form....gets no better than this! Happy new year, ethome  
ethome
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19 posted 2001-01-02 05:43 AM


Thanks Balladeer I tried to do all those things...take care...ethome
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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20 posted 2001-01-02 07:16 AM


Ah, beautiful!  What a lovely note to start the new year out on!

Love poems are my very favorite.  For what else brings the heart such joy?

Thank you!



Kethry
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21 posted 2001-01-02 08:08 AM


e babes, this was inspirational.
*Kethry comes across to ethome and grabs him and dances him around* Happy New year huggle bunny.
write on
Keth


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



ethome
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22 posted 2001-01-02 11:41 AM


Thank you Rosemary for the comments...and yes, you're right, without then what do we have....take care...ethome

Hey Keth my picnic partner..... what a great dance we just had! Thanks for coming over and reading this and giving me a big hug....ethome

keep-the-faith
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23 posted 2001-01-02 12:00 PM


I would love to hear the music...  

"Like a moonlit room on a honeymoon
you bring out the magic in love."

wonderful line...

Parker
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24 posted 2001-01-02 12:03 PM


ethome, tis a great song for the New Year. Of hope and love, always good.  

Parker

ethome
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25 posted 2001-01-02 04:31 PM


Thank you Keep The Faith and welcome to Passions. You'll enjoy it here...thanks again for the comment...ethome

Thanks Parker for the read....ya all come back now!.....ethome

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26 posted 2001-01-02 08:25 PM


A perfect love song! I love it, ethome!

Denise

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27 posted 2001-01-04 01:14 AM


Your music comes alive in this one sweet poet man...care to share the magic? Im singing right along with you....xxxxxx times a jillion
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28 posted 2001-01-04 12:21 PM


ethome-
I'm so glad I didn't miss this - there's absolutely nothing I did not like about it - it is truly wonderful ~S~

ethome
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29 posted 2001-01-05 06:07 AM


Thanks Denise glad you felt it that way... ethome

Thanks Paula I was trying to get the new year off on a positive love note...ethome

Bill I'm very pleased that you liked all of this thanks for taking the time to comment...ethome

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30 posted 2001-01-05 06:13 AM


ethome, my friend? I have been reading...and you are quite a romantic yanno...geez...I need some of that...sigh...

just lovely.

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31 posted 2001-01-05 01:40 PM


This is beautiful... Of course, I'm sitting at my desk avoiding work... so I'll have to pretend my sighs are from exhaustion instead of envy. *S*
Irish Rose
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32 posted 2001-01-05 01:54 PM


very romantic and beautiful

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen


ethome
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33 posted 2001-01-05 04:27 PM


Thanks Celeste and yes I am and so are you!

Suthern get back to work but thanks first!

My dear sweet wild Irish Rose thank you!

Elizabeth Santos
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34 posted 2001-01-05 04:40 PM


Ethome,
This is such an upbeat song to lift my spirits. It is the hope of the New Year and so delightful a verse.
Thank you for this, dear poet
(I love the rhyming scheme)
Liz

Tara Simms
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35 posted 2001-01-05 08:44 PM


What a perfect way to describe the feelings.  I just spent New Year's with my fiancee and this poem captured the feeling!  He does bring out the magic in love for me.
ethome
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36 posted 2001-01-06 04:57 AM


Thank you Elizabeth I'm glad to have given your spirits a lift....etmome

Tara I'm happy for you that you had  great new years celeb with your fiance...thanks for reading and commenting....ethome

Agust P
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37 posted 2001-01-06 08:50 AM


beautiful,  AP
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38 posted 2001-01-06 09:30 AM


Do keep up that possitive attitude, may your new year be wonderful  
ethome
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39 posted 2001-01-07 02:01 AM


Thank you Hoot I will keep the attitude and will be looking forward to reading and commenting for the remainder...ethome
ethome
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40 posted 2001-01-07 02:01 AM


Thank you Hoot I will keep the attitude and will be looking forward to reading and commenting for the remainder...ethome
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41 posted 2001-01-07 02:07 AM


the old grows new I'm still with you
as you bring out the magic in love.

sighing.....had hoped this to be a "forever feel" for me too...very nice E.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



ethome
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42 posted 2001-01-07 09:10 AM


Thank you Agust much appreciated!

Wynter I thank you for the enjoying that verse and for taking the time to read...ethome

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