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In This The New Year
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In This The New Year |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In This the New Year I shall hear a ballad be sung and see a feather write the moon and know that the Irish sing and see a cowboy in the noon I shall see a cobblestone lay the way and be serene in midst of gay and simonize all my floors that welcome me with open door then, in the write of response most in the welcome of gifted host as in the magic the magician sings on the lift of butterflies' wings see all the rainbows in the sky anniversaries hang on high see a wisdom from lower east see thus a dove on the nigh I shall be well in the repeat of song know in mind that one belongs the gift of Ladies what would be strong and in the sea we know the long in the Indian knowledge of we in these the suthernmost skies we acknowledge the romance that lies in the palm of trees that sigh then, in the young of the under in the lift of lee in the acknowledgement of mindset in the gift of we Should you see you here know that You are held most dear should you not hear this, the ring that I would want to bring to your heart know that I have tried to impart a signal to you, the poet sublime the word of you that always rhyme know that you then encompass all of the poetic words that pass to my brain in soulful refrain in my heart 'tis YOU remain Be well in this New Year Know that your Words are those I Hear Know that Your Song is the song that's Sung KNOW that you have just begun… know that the sigh of you is great know that your reasons always relate know that your chemistry is never too late know that somehow I can translate and be so very, very well in the wisdom of your swell know that I hear you in your sigh know that I hear on the bye and bye… In this the New Year might I translate may You know the Great of Great…. May you always be You 01.01.01 |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Karilea! Happy New Year! Denise |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Such a wonderful all-encompassing poem...and very special  May you receive everything you want and deserve in this coming year.... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful my friend. . . a HUG to you. . . and a wish for a wonderful New Year!!!! Now, come and celebrate with us down in The Alley!!! --------------------------------------------------------< !signature--> That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Marvelous...a riddle within the rhyme and guess what? I got it this time!!!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey you! You're at it again and I loved reading between the lines of this one...keep'em coming kiddo....you got a whole year to get to this point and I'll be watching for you........ethome |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Karilea ... just beautiful ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I loved it, thank you! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Absolutely stunning my friend and may you enjoy all that and more. You bring to us such warming moments everyday and I thank you kindly. HAVE A GREAT YEAR and I look forward to sharing it with you here in the best forum on the net. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Denise, thank you... 'Deer, I believe I shall...{~,^} thank you... Sven, missed the party, but arrived for clean up...thanks for the invite... PdV, never for a moment did I doubt that you wouldn't... Ethome, this one was so very "between the lines" and I'm sure you saw the smiles, too?...of course you did...thank you my friend... Kit, Irish, two fine ladies, thank you... Mark, never were truer words spoken...thank you... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, if wishes were my gift then I would gift to you All you need to make your life ring with love that's true Utterly wonderful, as always love. I love it Take care Mushy Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Reading between lines is not so easily done neither is writing Happy New Year Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Sunshine: This really brought tears to my eyes, the message was so very personal. Lovely, lovely, lovely!! "She's so beautiful, my brand new day bringing one happiness in her own sweet way..." *smiles* -Tier |
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