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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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Garland, Tx

0 posted 2000-12-31 04:44 PM


Oh My God
By Richard Maxfield
12-31-2000


Oh My God
What is this I see
Strange white stuff
Falling down at me

It coming down
Straight from the sky
Falling in my hair
Even in my eye

Its so dang cold
The dog is outside crying
She don’t understand
She might be dieing

Its starting to cover
All the frozen grass
I ran outside to look
Fell and busted my a—

You all should come
Look out and see
Its really happening
It’s not just me

It’s colder than
The heart of my Exs
Dang folks
It’s snowing in Dallas Texas


LOL I only have one ex but that did not fit.



[This message has been edited by maxtec1 (edited 12-31-2000).]

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lisad
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since 2000-12-05
Posts 22

1 posted 2000-12-31 04:52 PM


Richard,
LOL  I like this very much.  It seems to make the snow and bad weather not so bad anymore....lol   lisad

maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
2 posted 2000-12-31 05:16 PM


thank you for the comment friend.
love andlight,
Richard

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-12-31 05:24 PM


I am down in Corpus Christi and its been lightly raining since this morning. I'll gladly let it get colder if they would promise me some snow. Happy New Year a white blanket to start you out. Oh let the dog in!!
maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
4 posted 2000-12-31 05:38 PM


Well the dog in and she wont leave me alone.
She wants some love so her and I will take a nap. LOL Thanks for the comment.
Love and light,
Richard

And hey i want to come see you i love the Gulf.

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