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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2000-12-31 01:15 PM

One Touch Surrendering

Wrap me into nights fold
paint me softly on a canvas of dreams
where thoughts meet across boundaries
and I shall surrender to moments...of your touch.

~Soft kisses~ shall I place,
delicate as a whisper or with hardened edge
to carve my image into your mind. Stroke me
with your words, let me journey into your tomorrow.

As vanilla candles scent the air
and the dark beckons, reveal to me
that part of you that veils my heart, caressing,
drifting we, in timeless hold. And as indigo fills the night

I shall surrender to your voiced loving, embraced
by the feel of your body, the soft sweetness in sharing
that which is mine, unfolding, and from one touch, the colours
of the night shall be woven into our hearts and minds, wants and needs,

Bathing me forever in your charms. Each night,
feeling the tracings of your love, every moment turning,
leaving me breathless, as I await in the flickering shadows,
to surrender in the dark to the reality of your loving from just one touch...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

1 posted 2000-12-31 01:19 PM

gee Lady I have been in a mood all day and our poem sets me off again. I love it, so romantic and soft.
great writing,
Love and light,
Richard

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2000-12-31 01:47 PM

Afternoon Wynter,

This last verse of your writing has touched me. A romantic you are, and I sense you're back into your writings more than you ever were, since I've been reading them.

Bathing me forever in your charms. Each night,
feeling the tracings of your love, every moment turning,
leaving me breathless, as I await in the flickering shadows,
to surrender in the dark to the reality of your loving from just one touch...

A wonderfully written poem of inner most feelings Wynter. Thanks for sharing it with me.

BC

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2000-12-31 02:25 PM

Richard
glad you liked "our" poem

~softsmiles

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

4 posted 2000-12-31 02:33 PM

whether its yours ours or mine or his haa i like it

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

5 posted 2000-12-31 03:13 PM

a very tender and amazing touch. loved the poem.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-12-31 08:22 PM

*sigh*

I know that I'll surrender. . . this is very soft and Romantic. . . beautiful Wynter. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2000-12-31 08:25 PM

Reading instead of writing is going to be very relaxing, this is wonderful, Thank you!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

8 posted 2000-12-31 08:25 PM

Reading instead of writing is going to be very relaxing, this is wonderful, Thank you!!!!!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

9 posted 2000-12-31 09:44 PM

Simply beautiful, Wynter.
Sandra

ethome
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since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

10 posted 2001-01-01 12:14 PM

Wonderful soft, warm, sensuous and full of inner feelings. I really loved the romantic flow of this....which I might add....you do so very well....take care...ethome

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

11 posted 2001-01-01 05:05 PM

Bill - it's easy to write romantically when I am touched by so many others words on here..and they reach inside me and draw out hidden feelings. Thank you sweet one

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2001-01-01 05:08 PM

~V~ you are too much, yes I am not sure what Richard meant but it is a poem for "all" who like "the touch"

Brian- it's a always nice to touch you with words..thank you

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

13 posted 2001-01-05 06:56 AM

Sven- you must watch your words, Sweet Sven...*teasing you..thank you for the smile you just gave me...

Kathleen- relax all you want..it is "free" huggzz

Sandra- smiling at you..some moments in some days are wonderfully inspiring

E-thank you for the "soft, warm,and sensuous" ...and for responding so beautifully

My thanks to all

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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