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Like A Bubble
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Like A Bubble |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Like A Bubble Like a bubble with it's rainbow hues and light as air Your love was like a bubble and bursting it wasn't fair I was amazed and wondering that you could love me And I was right to be skeptical now that I can see I never believed that I was the person you said you saw It's my fault that my heart is lying on the cold hard floor Like a mist draping over, clouding and obscuring the view Your love was like a mist now I've lost the touch of you I didn't comprehend that you'd really want all of me And now I understand your heart needs to be free I've never fathomed the workings of my blinded heart It's my fault that this wretchedness began to even start Like a dream gone in fragments that remember loves touch Your love was a dream my heart misses you so very much I was bewildered by the idea that you had chosen me And I was right this love wasn't ever really meant to be I've always been surprised by the fascination of me for you It's my fault that I believed I found a heart that was true Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Oh Marsha, these dreams can come true! Yes, dreams will soon touch reality for everyone, and you will find that special heart that touches your heart in this dream and the many other lovely dreams you have! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey Mushy you're going to be OK because you're just too fine a person and the world has to realize that the loving warm and open people like you need to set the example of what truth and homesty is all about. Maybe the rest of the world can finally realize the advantages of that! Sure you loved him and you wanted it to work but the truth being known he may be the one who has lost! Especially as I and many others know you through this open poetry board... love to you......ethome |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
let me hold you kiss away your fear whisper truths soft on your ear I will lead you to light of love together hand and hand flying far above Okay dear not sure where this came from but there it is. Dear friend i know all to well the pain of which you seak. Great writing, Love and light, Richard |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~  Lots of new bubbles ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Marge is right, Mushy! There are lots of bubbles out there and you will find your true love-bubble one day!  Denise |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Noah thank you so very much, I do appreciate it, I honestly do. Take care  P T love, thank you so muchly, I really do. I will continue to grow and glow, the world still has hope, and there is always love in the world. Thank you kid, I'll be fine, this was before my dinner, certainly before the wine. And it reminded me what fun there is in this world we live in. And no matter how nimble my tongue was even I couldn't manage I'm not a pheasant plucker I'm a pheasant plucker's son and I'm only plucking pheasants until the pheasant plucker comes. I think my version sounded better  But I would wouldn't I. Take care love Mushy Richard, thank you love, that is very sweet of you, I'll get there. I may be down on my knees, I may be a bit punch drunk but I will stand and walk tall again. Take care Mushy Margie, thank you love, I'll float up on them, and I will like tham rise. Take care and thank you very much Mushy Denise, Thank you so very muchly, and I will be fine. I know it. Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love it happens, I will lift up my eyes and I will see heaven from here. Thank you love, take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautifully and sorrowfully written ... You have the most wonderful heart Marsha, and I have no doubts that you will indeed find the one to treasure it and hold it safely for the warmth and gentleness that it truly deserves. Best wishes and hugs to you, /Kit |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, your heart is showing. Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kit love, thank you so very very much, one of the reasons I love it so much here is that there are so many loving poets around. You know how much I appreciate you don't you love. I do hope so. Because I really do. Take care Mushy Kethry love, and words are not enough to say enough thanks to you love. As always you are there Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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