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maxtec1
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0 posted 2000-12-31 11:48 AM


Okay I woke up in a mood and read Victoria's poem and it set me off.


Night of Dance
By Richard Maxfield
12-31-2000

Roaring fire rages
Drooling strawberries drip
Bodies softly swaying
To a hypnotic beat

Lover’s eyes so deep
Fingers playing on skin
Lips brush your cheek
Warm is my breath

A kiss on your eyelids
Fingers in your hair
Bodies pressing tight
Restless hormones rage

Hands sliding down
On bare back
Lovers entwine
Passion on the fly

Soft gentle sigh
Bite my lower lip
Melting into one
Hearts pounding fast

Come dance with me
By the fire light bright
We shall spin to heaven
On this wondrous night

© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 2000-12-31 12:12 PM


Beautifully done, Richard! Passionate! Seems to be a lot of raging hormones around here lately!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-12-31 12:22 PM


Ohhhh yess haa..my poem "The silken stalk"..It most certainly did inspire you ha.. ..enjoyed Richard... and thank you, always nice to know when i inspire someone

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Charisma
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3 posted 2000-12-31 12:28 PM


well here I am....how can a woman resist such a dance... love it.

Happy new year.

((hugs))
Charisma

maxtec1
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4 posted 2000-12-31 02:02 PM


Thank you Ladies for youe wonderfulcomments.
Loveand light,
Richard

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