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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2000-12-31 11:15 AM


I don't want to leave a blank space here, but I would like to humbly offer my apologies to the entire forum for posting so irresponsibly...I am very much ashamed of myself for any worry I created.
I thank you all...and wish you all the happiest new year. I would actually like the entire thread deleted, but this will have to do for now. Please forgive me.


[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 01-01-2001).]

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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2000-12-31 11:17 AM


you ok????????????

hey...this has me worried!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



ethome
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2 posted 2000-12-31 11:26 AM


Celeste this is a great set of verses where you have used phrases that are excellent hooks for the reader. I like how you've done this...sort of like the inner love of life will conquer the apparent peace of death... well done mon Acadian cherie!
Stay aware I might have refer to your fine poetic wisdom someday!  have a real fine new year!      ethome

doreen peri
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3 posted 2000-12-31 11:31 AM


cool!!!



great plan~
wish i thought of it

*winkiewink*

this one sorta has an alchemy to it... which reminds me... gotta get writing!

really, seriously, though.... this poem screams with pain, anguish and heartache... my kinda poetry! you did a great job with it...

here's hoping 2001 is a better one for you, my friend!!!
happy new year!

cheers!

((((hug)))))

Denise
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4 posted 2000-12-31 12:32 PM


The light at the end of the tunnel is the answer to the prayer. Hope springs eternal! We just need to be aware of it! Blessed are the eyes that see!

Denise

Martie
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5 posted 2000-12-31 12:45 PM


yup, there is always a glimpse of light, right before the dawn...but the dark is so dark!  I hope your new year is bright!
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6 posted 2000-12-31 12:48 PM


Yes, there is always something more out there through every tunnel of pain! Stay strong, my friend, and you will find the light of that tunnelt o true love and joy! It will come! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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7 posted 2000-12-31 12:52 PM


Serenity~
And in her awareness she seeks the dawning
of a new day with promise.
Holding and enfolding you in love.
*Hugs*, my friend.
~*'Other' Mom*~



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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8 posted 2000-12-31 03:21 PM


so find it. . .

arise from the ashes, and be reborn. . . not as Phoenix. . . but as Light. . .

you can do it. . . you will find it. . .

strength to you Power of Light. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


doreen peri
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9 posted 2000-12-31 05:09 PM


*bump*

bumping this back up top because it needs to be read....

where you at, girl??? get in touch, k?
geez.... i'm listening to pink floyd thinking about the mardi gras...

you got me worried... *sigh*

Lana
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10 posted 2000-12-31 05:30 PM


heck she has me worried and I don't even know her, there's more to this than a positive message, does anyone know this girl!!!! Would someone reach out to her please.....if I'm out of line, I apologize, I don't want to lose my membership, but I know there must be some way to reach her even if it's not needed.....guess I'm full of California beans.....



“You’re everything I never knew I wanted.
Matthew Perry “Fools Rush In”
Lana

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11 posted 2000-12-31 05:32 PM


And me too !
And you need to call home, sweetie.
Love ya'
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2000-12-31 05:43 PM


ok baby....long list of people worried...
I wasnt gonna reply to this till I heard back on me E-mails to ya ...
but I'll pace with the girlie till we know ...
are ya getting that tooth fixed me twin?
love ya sen
me

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Marge Tindal
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13 posted 2000-12-31 05:51 PM


She was FINALLY heard from and thanks everyone for their concern.

Now, Happy New Year from ALL US MOTHER HENS !
~*Marge*~


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doreen peri
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14 posted 2000-12-31 06:01 PM


she says she's fine....
but we all knew she's fine.... she's very fine....

serenity.... serenity.... serenity...
now THAT sounds like a peaceful name....

god bless you girl.... we love you....

Nan
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15 posted 2000-12-31 06:39 PM


Have a Serene, Safe, and happy New Year...
Sunshine
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16 posted 2000-12-31 06:44 PM


all of the broody hens are clucking
Serenity...smiles on you,
and warmth in your hugs
received, and given...

Peace in Serene, my dear...

Irish Rose
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17 posted 2000-12-31 07:30 PM


sure, we're all moms!!!

it's our nature to brood...

whew!

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



serenity blaze
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18 posted 2000-12-31 07:40 PM


I AM SO SORRY......GEEZ...IT WAS A METAPHOR.....I LOVE YOU ALL TOO MUCH TO LEAVE YOU!!!!!!! I guess I could used the rebirth thing, huh?  geez....just trying to be born again tonight...sigh...now if you'll excuse me? I think my water just broke...and I am off to convince everyone now that I am not a prostitute either...sigh...what hath I wrought????
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19 posted 2000-12-31 07:45 PM


You know we wouldn't worry so much about you Karen if we didn't love you. . . we do you know. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


ethome
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20 posted 2001-01-01 06:38 AM


I never ever thought there was a problem from the very first as my first comment indicates. I thought Serenity was using these thoughts to make her point memorable and complete. It becomes sad in some ways when a poet has to pull in the reins of creativity thereby curbing their talent beneath their ability.
Believe me, I know we have to have limits here as this is a public forum...I'm just back to say I thought the two pieces in question were excellent and I enjoyed the vehicles Serenity used to make her thoughts flow...........as long as this remains a free and sovereign nation I feel that I have the right to express those feelings......ethome

serenity blaze
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21 posted 2001-01-01 08:10 AM


Oh ethome, I thank you. but nobody asked me to "pull" the poem....I did this voluntarily.
I don't regret writing it, I regret posting it, with no disclaimer. I thank you for your loveliness...HUGS.

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