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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738


0 posted 2000-12-31 07:43 AM


one more time
simple silver
all that me?
my heart, delivers.....
simple blue stone
on my thumb...
reminds me of the only one...

I placed it there
in troth of you
reminding me
that I?
love......you.

a filagree
upon my thumb...
my thoughts
they speak of only one...
an echo of eternity?
a silver love's
fatality
and every
part of me---
re-done....
simple silver
sun, undone...

and oh dear god...
palm best in me...
keep me plan's
delivery?
a spark of life's
totality?
silver, simple..
love, undone....

© Copyright 2000 serenity blaze - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-31 07:46 AM


Simple beauty

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-12-31 08:17 AM


"a spark of life's
totality?
silver, simple..
love, undone..."
What a plaintive cry you've written here Celeste and done it so well from a reflections point of view!! Write on dear girl!!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-12-31 08:33 AM


a filagree
upon my thumb...
my thoughts
they speak of only one...
an echo of eternity?
a silver love's
fatality
and every
part of me---
re-done....
simple silver
sun, undone...

and oh dear god...
palm best in me...
keep me plan's
delivery?
a spark of life's
totality?
silver, simple..
love, undone....

==================
your poetry makes me come undone ...
this is so you ... and thats a beautiful thing.
love to ya me twin
me

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374
ireland
4 posted 2000-12-31 08:36 AM


and oh dear god...
palm best in me...
keep me plan's
delivery?
a spark of life's
totality?
silver, simple..
love, undone....


your words just stole my breath. PHEW, loved the poem.  

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-12-31 08:35 PM


simply silver
sweetly sings
serenity's song
sighing sofly
saying silently
shine starlight



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
6 posted 2001-01-01 08:21 AM


to me a filigree is  a beautiful way of displaying a "jewel" of serenity

huggzzz and a Happy New Year to you...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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