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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2000-12-30 10:35 PM

Abiding alone
as usual
I am thinking,
maybe a new identity
will bring me a new
life.
Maybe
Ice princess??
I could learn
to like this,
in a strange way.
To live out my days
encased in frozen
solitude,
the alternative to hot
bloody, heart rupturing
love,
yes,
maybe
ice princess
will do it..

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2000-12-30 10:43 PM

A solid, yet sad piece catalinamoon, I liked it very much

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2000-12-30 10:48 PM

Hey catalinamoon I hope you decide to live out your days in sunshine.....maybe sun princess??? Peace.....

Greeneyes~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

BloomingRose
Member Elite

since 2000-08-09

Posts 3092
Florida

3 posted 2000-12-30 10:55 PM

I can surely relate to this! Sometimes that wall of ice sounds good, especially when your heart bleeds.
Good poem!
Deb

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

4 posted 2000-12-30 11:16 PM

Sandra,
A decadent change of venue for you. I like it!! But I know in your heart, you could never truly be an "Ice Princess". There's too much fire and passion left in you, and I know you will "keep the dream alive" If not this one, then a new one....
Love you, Elise

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2000-12-31 12:58 PM

no doubt. . . definitely NOT "Ice Princess". . . I have a better title. . . "Heat Queen". . .that's much better. . .

excellent poem. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2000-12-31 04:06 PM

Cat, I agree with Greeneyes, perhaps some sunshine in your life...here, take my hand, and we shall thaw each other out...and if you have to stay cold for a little while, then I shall name you Crystallina...and your words will dance in sprite spirit form all across the blue...

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