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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-12-30 09:33 PM



~Somewhere Over The Moon~

Somewhere over the moon
the keeper of stars
sprinkles stardust of blue
on lovers in misty moonlight,
walking among sleeping trees
wolves call to thousands of stars,
gazing at falling snow
lovers kiss among twinkling lights,
charisma captured in misty eyes of blue
sends whispering sighs
across the night,
to quietly touch the moon


BloomingRose


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-30 09:42 PM


you have the loveliest way of speaking so quietly...I know someone who speaks like you...and I wish you both well...
BloomingRose
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2 posted 2000-12-31 08:39 AM


Sunshine~ Thank you, glad you like the quiet scene.  
Someone speaking quietly other than me... hmmmmmm who might this mystery person be???

ethome
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3 posted 2000-12-31 08:46 AM


Beautiful scene you have created with a word picture!....take care ethome
Mark Bohannan
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4 posted 2000-12-31 09:41 AM


I have to agree with Karilea on this one.........now about this mystery person???    Have a Happy New Year my friend and may it "continue" to find you blessed with all that you need.
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5 posted 2000-12-31 06:41 PM


BloomingRose~
Your writing is so gentle and delicate.
Indeed, it comes across as a whisper.
Happy New Year, dear lady.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-12-31 07:07 PM


This is beautiful BloomingRose ... so delicate and lovely, such a wonderful mood you've set with these words!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

BloomingRose
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7 posted 2000-12-31 07:32 PM


ethome~ Thank you much, I could not resist the picture with the wolf near the trees

Mark~ Glad you like this. As for this mystery person, I have no clue. I guess someone knows something I don't know.
Oh well, all in fun.

Marge~ So glad you like this.
*Hugs* back to you!

Kit~ Thanks so much for reading. I was looking for some peace and quiet and so I was inspired by the picture I found.

[This message has been edited by BloomingRose (edited 12-31-2000).]

Victoria
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8 posted 2000-12-31 07:33 PM


a lovely visual poem Deb..enjoyed reading and have a wonderful new year..HUGS..

                    ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)



Sven
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9 posted 2000-12-31 07:48 PM


*whispering*

I don't know who this person is either. . . but if you look over there, I can see the wolf. . .

beautiful poem Deb. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
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10 posted 2000-12-31 11:01 PM


so lovely Deb...
wonderful imagery...
written like a windswept promise
beautiful poetry
Happy New Year
jm

Sprayed across my heart and hers
Danced butterflies in the wild
This angel, this woman ,
who loves me with the innocence of a child.
~DeVante~

Temptress
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11 posted 2000-12-31 11:15 PM


Breathtaking poem and scene.  

Denise
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12 posted 2000-12-31 11:34 PM


Very lovely! Serene!

Denise

BloomingRose
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13 posted 2001-01-01 09:57 AM


Victoria~ Thank you and I hope you have a wonderful 2001!

Sven~ Thank you, and a Happy New Year to you!

JM~ Thank you, may the new year inspire you with new and wonderful things!

Temptress~ Thank you   glad you like this one

Denise~ Thank you sweet one, hope you have a blessed and happy 2001


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