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Looking Back |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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And so as I look back at misplaced dreams and fantasies of old love renewed, I hold ever close the hope of unity that once bonded us to eachother as though we were within the same cocoon. Yet knowing this the hope fades daily, as your life goes on to other butterflies, leaving behind the one who most gloried in your colours. I look back at years of certain yearning grown to encompass my heart in the silken strands of your need and now I know that looking forward is the only truth remaining and I sadly say goodbye with the unwarranted thought that we may in this next year, this new year, another millenium, say hello again. [This message has been edited by catalinamoon (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Cat, my thoughts are with you...and my best wishes for the coming century...you shall be on top!...for you are, a class act... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sandra, You showed him colors that no one ever will in the same way you did. A beautiful masterpeice, from a heart that will rise again to that kind of love. That is my wish for you in the new year. Love you, Elise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed my friend. . . you will know love again. . . as will we all. . . You have spoken to me with this one. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
HUGS to you ...hope your Christmas with your little granddaughters was a Merry one.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soft, lovely and sad, all at the same time. Very well written! Denise |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
There is much beauty in sadness when it composed with feeling. Wonderful poetry, well written and expressed. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Each comment made here reflects my feelings upon reading your words. Wonderful writing, Catalinamoon,I hope that this new year brings you all the love your heart can hold... *smiles* -Tier |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
a beautiful poem, an I am sure that the new year will be filled with blessings and wonders. Shine on, for you are a very talented poet. take care. It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy |
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