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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... 
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Close your eyes, Please! Tell me what it is you see? Do you see the lovers walking hand in hand? Is it just a distant dream viewed through clouded eyes? Or lost memories that brings that gentle smile? Savored moments from times thought past? Or gentle thoughts of loving touch? Tell me! When you close your eyes, Do you see me? "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh my heart! Eddie,...this is so touching. Really, a heart of a write. *Peace. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
My husband said, "I better not be seeing you when I shut my eyes." I do enjoy your poetry, though. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
heartfelt.....my eyes are to cloudy now, but I will try to close them...and hope to see clear. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Yes, I really like this alot...If they would look and listen they would always see, don't you think? ~LL~ The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is very refreshing to read. Many times I've noticed people close their eyes and I wonder what they are dreaming of. Thank you for this one. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* with the sweetness of the words you write it is easy to close my eyes and see an eagle soaring high and free. Much love and a New Years kiss from me to you Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
EagleOne~ This is such a heartfelt piece - 'gentle thoughts of loving touch' This is what I see. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i like this alot eddie..soft and tender..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Eddie, this one is beautiful. I know when I close my eyes my love is the one I see, and how can we help but wonder if they see love the same as oneself does. Well done. Donna On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
This is beautiful. There will be a lot of closed eyes and smiles the New Years. Wonder what they will "see"? Love and hugs, Mom |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
SpitFire ~ Hold onto that heart girl. Always a pleasure to have you stop by. Take care!inot2u ~ It is always nice to know someone enjoys my ramblings, thankyou! Charisma ~ Sometimes we see the clearest when our eyes are closed, take care! Lady Lightning ~ I think more often than not there seems to be some clouds in the way! Glad you liked. Irish Rose ~ It is I who thanks you dear lady, for reading and adding your thoughts. And yes, I wonder too. Startime ~ sometimes we need to close our eyes to fly. I thank you for your always sweet words, take care! Marge ~ Thankyou my friend, even with the eyes closed there is much to be seen. Take care! Victoria ~ I'm so glad you liked this one. Donna ~ Then think you should close your eyes, and smile. I think we all wonder, especially when they smile. Mother Earth/Mom ~ Thankyou! Who knows what they will see, we shall only know what we see. Thankyou for stopping by, take care!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hmm yes, a question asked many times, by many. Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Words written from a giving heart. Good poetry! Deb |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
YES |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I closed my eyes...and saw him. Piercing eyes of kindness...soft smile beneath a moustache...a dimple...and felt his breath as he said "I need to thank EagleOne someday for making you see me!"...thanks! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
your so good...I see ya when my eyes are opened or closed  very cool write Eagle... there you go getting all romantic on us..and we love it love the sincerity of this... well done poet sir jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Maree ~ Yes indeed, of that I am sure! Deb ~ Good or bad is for the reader to judge I think, glad you thought so. Paula ~ Always nice to know you have read my work. PDV ~ It is your thought so close your eyes and smile. Janet ~ . I think you should seek medical advice about your vision problem lol. Thank you so much for your kind works my poet friend. Take care!I wish a happy New Year to one and all, may your year be filled with peace, love, and poetry! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
This was so beautiful EagleOne. It flowed so softly ... as tender as a whisper, just lovely! Best wishes for a wonderful New Year! /Kit |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Thankyou Kit, such a lovely response. All the best to you and yours! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very nice read indeed sir. Closing the eyes can bring many things and allow us to escape the world even if for just a brief moment. Happy New Year to you. I know you have already celebrated there so I am sorry that I am late in the wishes. |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Oh, this is lovely!! Very nice!! Denise |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful work! Close the eyes and reflect what do you see...I loved it! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Mark ~ Thank you Sir! Yes there can be great freedom within ourselves, and at times we certainly do need those little escapes! And right now you should be in the middle of your celebrations! Denise ~ I Thank you, It is pleasing to know that you enjoyed. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
ethome ~ I missed you there. Thanks, glad you liked it, nothing like a bit of reflection from time to time. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
an urgent whisper in candlelight..thats what i feel when i read this... i've often wondered the same sort of wonder..sometimes with love..sometimes with friendship--those 'long lost' friends; i sometimes wonder "when you see the same moon that i now look upon, do you ever think of me.." hmm..thoughtful poem eagle..i like thoughtful poems.. happy new year.. hugs, g "people who need people are the luckiest people..." barbra s. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
**closing my eyes** this is what I see.... Falling stars that call to be wished on Silver moon beams that beg to be danced upon Sunlit meadows that ache to be run through Rose sunrises that sing to be gazed into Winter nights that tremble to be held near Rainy afternoons that beckon without fear Angels with wings of gold that cannot fly And best of all...I see friends that never say goodbye  Thank you my dear friend....I do so love to close my eyes and gaze into the darkness and see the light of inspiration for what I cherish most. Excellent writing dear poet...as always your poetry speaks to me softly~ |
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