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roselee
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since 2000-09-22
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0 posted 2000-12-30 06:17 PM


                     Spoken Words

This poem I am writing deep from my heart,
How cruel, unkind, our words can impart,
When said to a loved one that has now depart,
Rips me to pieces and tears me apart.

My memories burn deep within my soul,
By the words I spoke and hurt you so,
On the day you died I cannot erase,
The terrible hurt upon your face.

I said I hated you and wished you would die,
Now I live with this awful lie,
Anger was in my heart that day,
Now I wish I could take back the words I did say.

Little did I know you would die that day,
My memories haunt me, the price I pay,
Now I say, forgive me Father,
From someone you loved, your child, your daughter.

Words said in anger hurts through and through,
They cut like a knife and destroy you too,
Always be careful of the words you say,
God can grant your wish this very day!




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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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1 posted 2000-12-30 06:24 PM


very heart felt writing. Words can be very powerful but i find actions show a persons true heart. great job.
love and light,
Richard

Live like there is a tomorrow.

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2 posted 2000-12-30 06:31 PM


you are so right....wise spoken words.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

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