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Charisma
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0 posted 2000-12-30 06:14 PM


Don't let me walk alone...


I need you
now more than before
oh how I need you
in my pain and sorrow
why can't you hold me
tight in your embrace
don't you really see
that wet rainy day's
grey without perspective
ray of darkness
pulling me to insanity
oh how I miss
loving warmth besides me
when I walk alone
on a path so slippery

I know what you want from me
as ever to be strong for you
but I am a woman with a heart
that being hurt so deeply
and without comfort from you
is like we lives apart

don't let it be history
that all I need was you
don't wait to long
cause I'm not strong
indeed.

Charisma


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1 posted 2000-12-30 06:32 PM


Charisma~
Sweet, sweet friend ~

You will not walk alone - for there are those who hold your hand and hold you in our hearts.

Our collective strength will be yours.
Love - hugs - and prayers.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 2000-12-30 06:33 PM


I loved this poem. very good writing the feelings of the heart.
Love and light,
Richard

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3 posted 2000-12-30 06:55 PM


Charisma,
    Eloquent!  And may you not have to walk alone...ever.
           Elise

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4 posted 2000-12-30 06:57 PM


I have walked alone with others beside me and now I do not even though I walk alone.  Bless you...you will never be alone here! (If this is about you, sometimes it's hard to tell!)

"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

Kathleen



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5 posted 2000-12-30 10:13 PM


we never walk alone my friend. . . for there is always one that walks with us. . .

superb. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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6 posted 2000-12-31 12:33 PM


..thank you all for your reply and your warm thoughts and friendship.....and will hope that the new year bring better day's.

happy new year to all of you.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma


[This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 12-31-2000).]

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7 posted 2000-12-31 12:42 PM


Got to have that sholder to lean on and cry on...it's just life isn't it and what a comfort it can be when one has a love that is behind them all the way....I hope he doesn't wait too long to get back there and support you...take care     ethome
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8 posted 2000-12-31 04:56 PM


Charisma, I hope that you indeed receive the support you deserve, and that love treats you well.
This is haunting in its plea. Take care.
Sandra

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9 posted 2001-01-01 06:49 PM


ethome: yeah I hope that too...thank you for your kind reply.

Catalinamoon: thank you for your kind words my friend, and well let's hope that everything will work out well...

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10 posted 2001-01-01 08:01 PM


Evening Charisma'

I read the sadness in your writing, and the words that you express how you feel. I wish you the best, stay strong, and may the next day bring you happiness.

BC

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11 posted 2001-01-02 07:00 PM


thank you Bill for your kind words...
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12 posted 2001-01-02 07:50 PM


Charisma,
You have my warm embrace to prove that I will not let you walk alone. Cheers and big HUGS from me.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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13 posted 2001-01-02 09:29 PM


Daniel: thank you for that warm embrace and the cheering up....you are a wonderful sweet friend...  

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14 posted 2001-01-02 09:32 PM


Walk alone? with a Balladeer around? NO WAY!! Take my hand, Charisma....
JamesMichael
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15 posted 2001-01-02 11:28 PM


I know this feeling...even with friends all around you it is a special one that will fill your heart with joy and you will lose your loneliness in that one person and feel complete...James
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16 posted 2001-01-03 03:53 PM


Balladeer: thank you for reaching your hand out....you are a good friend, love you for that *s*

james: yes you know it....and its an lonely feeling.....thank you for passing by.

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