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Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

0 posted 2000-12-30 05:03 PM

Love is closer than the air I breathe
not upon distant shores..nor another border
love reaches out and kisses softly my lips
weaving through my hair..his gentle fingertips

love is close..our hearts warmly share
orange marmalade spread upon the morn
naked images within steam of roasted coffee

love is sweeter than sugar and spice
sweeter than honey..forever to entice
wiggle in my walk..whisper words I talk
he is my blackboard I am his chalk
weaving webs of thoughts
love climbing like a silken stalk

the whispers of his breath
traveling, the path of my neck
exploring hills and valleys
with playful little pecks

I feel . . . I hear
melodies of love notes

"Come make love with me"

his eyelash tickles our destiny
lost within caverns of my love

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-30-2000).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2000-12-30 05:07 PM

I almost feel as if I am interrupting but might you have an extra cup of coffee? Seriously...this is a beautiful write and shows how a love can cause us to get wonderfully lost in the world. Loved this read for sure.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2000-12-30 05:29 PM

the whispers of his breath
traveling, the path of my neck
exploring hills and valleys
with playful little pecks

hmmm you sure are writing your feelings lately

~~softsmiles and huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

3 posted 2000-12-30 06:14 PM

mark..thats ok..you can interrupt anytime you want ..ha..so glad you enjoyed...Happy new year to you ..and a new year kiss to you too..before the line gets too long haa..

Wynter..well you do know all my secrets girl haa...not that i dont know yours too..HUGS..

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

4 posted 2000-12-30 10:11 PM

So I take it you had a nice Christmas??

Very romantic stuff, I want to know whats in that cofee..
Sandra

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

5 posted 2000-12-30 10:37 PM

Love is closer than the air I breathe"

awww indeed such beauty in all your words....hope your christmas was wonderful....Happy New Year.....

Lauren~ (Greeneyes)

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2000-12-31 01:04 AM

I'm with Sandra. . . pour me a cup of that. . .

wonderful Victoria. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Wilfred Yeats
Member Elite

since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

7 posted 2000-12-31 01:12 AM

oh to be able to inspire such thoughts! = a consumation devotely to be wished!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

8 posted 2000-12-31 05:50 AM

Love is all this and more, a beautifully tender poem. AW sigh.

It's in your eyes a fire that's wild and glorious
Unhibited, unfinished in everything I do Let the morning rise like our hearts desire" whipping boy

maxtec1
Senior Member

since 2000-12-09

Posts 577
Garland, Tx

9 posted 2000-12-31 11:07 AM

WOW lady!!! I already woke upin the mood for love and now that I read this one I'll have to go take a cold shower. this poem blew me away.
Love and light,
Richard

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

10 posted 2000-12-31 11:59 AM

Beautifully romantic, Victoria! Lovely!

Denise

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

11 posted 2000-12-31 12:40 PM

Just images showering in the steam mmm
thanks Sandra..glad you enjoyed hon.HUGS

Greeneyes..thank you so much Lauren..did not
know if you knew it was me or not haa..CyberHugs ha.
Hope your new year will be a very happy one too

sven..one cup coming up sven ha..if
you can handle it haa

Bill..i dont think you need too much inspiration ha
you do pretty good yourself guy HUGS

bRIAN..THANK you so much..yes it is..so nice
to hear from you..btw brian is my sons name too.

Richard..Thank you ..but i never could
take a cold shower haa brrrrr..

Denise thank you so much..Happy new year to
you sweet lady..HUGSS

~Victoria~

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

12 posted 2000-12-31 12:47 PM

How openly sensual and loving this piece is. My what a wonderful world this can be when two are sharing love...and these warm sensuous verses speak so well of it... take care ethome.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

13 posted 2000-12-31 02:36 PM

hi ethome..hope you have a wonderful new year..and so glad you enjoyed..nice to hear from you today

~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2000-12-31 10:55 PM

Aha...indeed you are very romantic and I like that about you...James

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

15 posted 2001-01-01 07:31 AM

thank you james and it takes one to know one

hope you enjoy your trip to Ca..HUGS

~Victoria~

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