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Nate Dogg
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0 posted 2000-12-30 03:38 PM


I'm gonna have some fun and let y'll guess because, this golden poet, is definitely from Passions!

His pen rides the pad and unfolds,
through the depths of his soul,
to unleash rhymes of gold,
as his creativity flows like an ocean,
in smooth, rhythmatic motions,
as he's light years ahead of his peers
cause, his style's cooler like a glass of root beer,
as his expression of the subject is always accurate,
as his rhyming and wordplay is truly immaculate,
as the sunlight of his brilliance is unparalleled,
and as time goes on, he will continue to excel
as he's a very special writer,
who inspires my deepest desires,
to set my soul ablaze, from my poetic fires,
and man, if only ? knew,
how I vainfully wish,
to write poems like you,
as in the midst of endless timing,
your essence will stay refining,
and continue to sparkle, like a diamond.

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-12-30 04:28 PM


This could encompass so many of the wonderful male poets 'round here...any more clues you might want to bestow?
Janet Marie
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2 posted 2000-12-30 04:29 PM


Well off hand Im not sure...
but whoever it is...you have written them an AWESOME tribute
excellent rhyme and cadence and wonderful imagery and metaphor
I was first gonna say it was SY Tabin ...
but one of your clues leads me to believe its younger poet...and Im not real familiar with all in the teen forum ...
but I do know of a couple awesome teen poets
so I will make that guess...
Is it Spyro? Our Sammy dragon?
Or Ethan Halo? ...my poet pal?
who ever it is...they inspired a way cool poem in you.
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2000-12-30 04:32 PM


What a beautiful tribute to a talented poet here! I can't think of who he is either, but everyone here posts such wonderful work and I wouldn't be suprised whoever it is! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Sven
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4 posted 2000-12-30 04:34 PM


this is great!!

and whoever he is. . . I'm sure that he's thrilled and humbled that he can inspire you in this way. . .



*can't wait to find out who it is!!*

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton
5 posted 2000-12-30 05:09 PM


Thanks Sunshine for responding and the mystery is ready to be solved!
Thanks Janet, you always write me excellent posts...you're the best...love ya!
Thanks my pals, Mistletoe and Sven....you two are great poets too!

Now to the mystery.... Ha, ha, the answer to ? has already been said, and the person who said it is very smart...now, I not gonna reveal but I think you all have a clear idea of who this person now!

PS. And like what Sunshine said, "there are plenty of wonderful male poets around here"...I wholeheartedly agree!


Nathan

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