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With Color and Pride |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Strangely, I awoke yesterday, with a feeling of panic. No money, and an aching, wondering once again How can time pass me by, and leave on the doorstep Emptiness...so I busied myself, painting my feelings Across the wide expanse of walls, and sponged the tears, Leaving my trails for all to see. I bordered them in my blackness, exposing them To the light of day, hoping the sprays of mauve and blue And touches of teal, would be my gift to share, To fill the emptiness, with a piece of the rainbow.  Stepping back, I admired the presence of spirit That was left behind for all to see, and then realized The "all" was only me. And that even filling the empty With color and pride, I would still have to continue on the path To complete my rainbow, the one that is just around the corner Hidden behind the clouds of my days...mysting my life With droplets of hope, as I wait to reign upon and complete The canvas, I have stretched before me. ~Wynter...just another day in wait < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 12-30-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You have provided yourself with all of the answers...you will thus provide yourself with the action as well... good job! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
not all the answers yet..although I am becoming a very good private investigator...might be just the job I should seek *s thank you  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Keep looking..don't give up. I like this poem - it speaks to ME as well.  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful, Wynter! Your rainbow doesn't have to be completed in one day...just one day at a time! Denise |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Morning Wynter, Very touching Wynter, very touching. YOu have an enormous amount of talent within, and I see your soft emotions in your writings. Nice job on the wall. BC |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful expression Wynter ... you've touched something in me as well within the depths of these words ... very nicely written and lovely visuals! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
yes i think you should be an investigator ha...nice wall..looks clearer than it did on my pc yesterday..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Poet deVine I can't give up I have too much fight in me..*s thank you for responding Denise that's what I am doing taking it one day at a time...thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I paint with my words and I loved this., the border is beautiful. Yes, I know about giving up. Many say I should have a long time ago but I'm Irish. What can I say? As long as I can write and express I will not give up. And don't you either! Naked thoughts are well dressed in an array of color and beauty and we need that around here. "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wynter, this is beautiful, and so is the wall.. Keep the dream alive..I will if you will.. Sandra |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
BC- I worked so hard on that wall..I should call it the wall of tears...the ending of the sad ones and the beginning of the happy ones.....of satisfaction huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
/Kit- thank you for saying that..and I am glad you enjoyed the visual...I am kind of proud I wasn't sure it would turn out..nothing ever does til completed...*smiles ~V~ must be your settings then onyour computer ... yes I think I will see about becoming a private eye..*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you have expressed your feelings very well....and in front of this new year I wish you all the best.....may all your wishes and hopes will be true. (((hugs)) Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kathleen- such a beautiful reply..I thank you..and I love your latest picture.. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful writing! I like the style you are using here. Apart from that the ideas are very well expressed and you got the reader absorbed completely.....you will complete the picture ...your own way and in your own time........great stuff! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Sandra-the dream is alive and well  Charisma-thank you and I wish you the same..that all things beautiful come your way... Ethome- not sure about the style..was just heart created at the moment needing to express myself ..thank you E {{huggzz}} Oh and guess what..my walls are done...and pleased, I am...now for the rest of my life... sighing her thanks... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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