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His Fingerprints (For Janet Marie)

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Butterflies_dont_cry
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Devante`s Weave..with Love

A meeting of destiny’s chance
A melding of lost souls
Slow and unsure you move on
With the fragile newness of  fouls

Touch and pull back afraid to feel
Reaching silently beyond the pain
He saw only what he had to loose
Leaving you to show what was to gain

Words of hope in the night
Became more than saving grace
How could you ever have known
A fight against time you would race

The unforgiving clock began to tick
Louder with each passing day
The wick of death’s candle lit
Coming to take him away

You gave the love he needed most
With each show of gentle heart
In turn love and forgiveness bestowed
Each moment a sweet work of art

He showed you how to love
And then how to let go
An ultimate gift he requested of you
Reaching to a poet’s heart you did show

You allowed him to walk on
Back to the angels he flew
Trying desperately to keep
Promises that were begged of you

Through him you rained sweetness
Drenched with pain and ache
Your words no longer your own
A new form together they take

Giving wings to his spirit and soul
Upon your heart his fingerprints I see
From your lips I hear his voice
~Butterflies are meant to be free~

~Repost~

Janet Marie...I love you and through you I love him...it's time for him to be free so he can come home to you...watch him fly and smile, because baby, you know he is watching.  Of all the lessons he taught you...I thank him most for unconditional love...because you shared it with me, he is so proud of you...I know this...and you know why~
~*~
Million Miles

These are the days that make up the lifetimes
These are the lifetimes that make up generations
These are the lifetimes that make up generations
These are the days that make up the lifetimes

~Tabitha's Secret~

Gone

If you're gone - maybe it's time to go home
There's an awful lot of breathing room But I can hardly move
If you're gone - baby you need to come home
cuz there's a little bit of something in me In everything in you

~MB20~

~It's time to set the Butterfly free....time for him to come Home...It's time to celebrate~



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serenity blaze
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1 posted 12-30-2000 06:13 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Beautiful Holly...and he already does live on, in her words and heart and now in ours...

This is very moving...a lovely gift for our lovely girl....
Butterflies_dont_cry
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2 posted 12-30-2000 06:17 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

You are so right S'en...he does live on.  Love you my friend...will e-ya soon! Big ole hugs from me to you~
tracie66
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Sweet butterflies~
Wonderful piece, very touching.
Your heart is pure gold, this is a beautiful read and a lovely thing to do.
~HUGS~ to you and to Janny
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


BloomingRose
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4 posted 12-30-2000 07:36 AM       View Profile for BloomingRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BloomingRose

Beautiful, and very touching.
Deb
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5 posted 12-30-2000 08:03 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Butterfies dont cry but moths do baby...
me thinks there is a rule about making me  singe proof mascara run this early me sweet  
Thank you for this Holly...YOU KNOW how much the poems you wrote of him for me mean to me..
you were the first one of several in here who have felt his wings brush your cheek ...
and as I said on Marks post...
I treasure the butterfly poems that have been inspired by my love of him...
I know they (you) too see his light.
thank you for that my butterfly girlie ...
I love you too me SS ...
like loving him... thats always been easy...
things like this is one reason why.
Butterfly kisses and angel wing hugs to ya
me



Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know
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6 posted 12-30-2000 09:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

ButterfliesDC~
This is a lovely and thoughtful write for a friend.
Thanks for sharing it with all of us.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Martie
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Butterflies--this is so tender and full of your love and friendship...hugs!
brian madden
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BDC, a beautiful poem, for two beautiful souls.

In the morning I am a recluse,lost in memory,
ideal situations and convulsions... They built pop mart for Bono
so he could gaze out across the bay"
Mother_Earth
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Oh, my Butterfly, you have made the tears flow and as of yet, I don't know Janet Marie's lost love. He had to be very special I send love and hugs to JM and you. ME
Kit McCallum
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10 posted 12-30-2000 12:49 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

This is beautiful Butterflies ... your love for Janet Marie shines through these sentiments ... you are an exceptional and true friend. Much love to you, and to JM during this difficult anniversary,

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit
Mark Bohannan
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Holly, this is just like you to make our mutual "MOTH" feel the special bond that you have with her and I know that she enjoys the fact that you can share in the celebration with her of him by knowing and loving him through her.  You my friend have a true heart of the butterfly angel that has been bestowed upon you and you share it so wonderfully.  I know that you know how she is touched by this and that makes the whole world brighter.
Janet Marie
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12 posted 09-24-2001 11:29 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Giving wings to his spirit and soul
Upon your heart his fingerprints I see
From your lips I hear his voice
~Butterflies are meant to be free~
==============================

needed to read this one...
some nights... the missing him is just too much....
miss your poetry around here girlie girl
love you H.

Well tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I found a love so strong
The sun and the moon looked on in jealousy

passing shadows
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oh geez...no hanky alert...
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14 posted 08-21-2005 03:41 PM       View Profile for Mysteria   Email Mysteria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mysteria

He showed you how to love
And then how to let go
An ultimate gift he requested of you
Reaching to a poet’s heart you did show

That was sure the truth!

I have been reading all her poems during this time, and no one can write such density of living love as she did for her butterfly.

Lovely gift and lovely poem.
 
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