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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2000-12-30 12:35 PM


Just a moment
I don't want to go there
for a second
won't you
just look me in the eye?
I can't speak no words
that might hurt
and it isn't easy
to bite my tounge
it hurts too bad
but to hurt me
would be better
then the pain
my words may cause you
so for for just a moment
won't you please
just
kiss me....
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Julie  




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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2000-12-30 12:40 PM


oh this is very nice  

Maree

"If my words could blanket the skies
and fill every corner and crevice of
this earth, still this wouldn't be enough"
"Maree Russo"


Sven
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2 posted 2000-12-30 04:22 PM


now that's a plan!



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2000-12-30 04:24 PM


Oh, this was such a beautiful poem (sigh) I hope he has been able to feel the love you have for him! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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