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BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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0 posted 2000-12-29 09:09 PM




~Then I Will Know~

When we walk in the snow
then I will know if your cheeks glow
and I'll kiss away the cold

When we share a morning kiss
then I will know the love of it
and surrender in sweet bliss

When we hold hands
then I will know if they are cold or warm
and feel the tenderness of your touch

When we dance in the rain
then I will know the sound of your laughter
and I'll know if you feel the same

When we love before a fireplace
then I will know if you love me too
and feel the fire in your embrace

When we share tears
then I will know peace
and console your broken heart

When we touch the moon and stars
then I will know how far love will go
and share eternity with you

When we have shared all there is
then I will know what it is
to be loved
by you

BloomingRose


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Denise
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1 posted 2000-12-29 09:54 PM


Very beautiful, Deb! Lovely thoughts!

Denise

Startime
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2 posted 2000-12-29 10:03 PM


*sigh* how perfect are your words. I know this feeling well yet in my soul I seem to know already. There I go off into dreams again. Wonderful poem, dear one. I loved its feel. Much love and New Years hugs to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2000-12-30 12:19 PM


When we touch the moon and stars
then I will know how far love will go
and share eternity with you

When we have shared all there is
then I will know what it is
to be loved
by you

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beautiful sentiments Deb...
all the ingredients for souls mates
wonderful expressive writing
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

roselee
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since 2000-09-22
Posts 26

4 posted 2000-12-30 11:13 AM


Very beautifully said.
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-12-30 01:52 PM


Soul-mates bonded by ALL the beauty of God's wonderous gifts of nature and the ability to feel.  Superb writing my friend.  You are growing remarkably and that says something as you were came in here good already.  Of course you know that I loved the images this one paints as well.  Have a wonderful New Year.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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