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Look Inside/ Wish I Was
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Look Inside/ Wish I Was |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
I like All Others All I SayDo Human Dichotomy Searching Sailing Twixt Heart and Mind A Breathtakingly Slow And Constricting Instant Race EvermoreSearching I, I Question ALL ALL the Time Demanding Aceeptable Proofs Who Defines That I Recalculate Reaching Reaching Unfortunately Seen Too Many Ministers Punch The TimeClock And Run ScreamPonderingSees PracticeWhatYouPreach Would Love To Say That is Me Being Human I Constantly Nullify That Dream SomeHowBelieving Wish I Had No Prejudcies No Anger No PreJudged Beliefs Sorry Self Cannot Live Again Each Day Again Reclassifying Thoughts I Was Given SeekingPastTearedWindows I Was Given Many Things As We All Love of Love Biases To Hatreds Painted On That List Of Growing I Must Apologize I Am Just A Human Being Look Round With X Billions Of Us What Have We Created ScreamingRendingLife Looking To What We Swear Allegiance To What We have BeenShould Be ToldShowPreachedPresented All Invoking Dying Loyalty Death In A Minor key My Heart I Say Has Loyaltys Too I Wish I Wish They Were Dedicated All To Wisdom And Truth StrivingBloodySoulSeeing I Cannot Claim Neither Wisdom Nor Truth Could That Ever Come True This Life A Pathways Portal Human I Feel Fault and Folly Rising Always HearingSelf ScreamingWorld But I Do, Strive To Be To SeeFeel The Ways BeyondVision Wrestle With The Question GOD Via ever KnownToMe Religion I Still EndUpSaying That Which We Call God How I Wish I Was Enlightened Regular Stroll The Golden Mile OpeningHeartKnowsSoul Sorry Self Still Human Cannot Seem To Find The Mile One Thing Need To Say Aches In Every Moment I Breathe Haunts Me Stalks Me From Youth No Escape Voluntary Blinders In Place Worn By Masses Tear Away The MindsNight TearsBringingHopeRemaining OH PEOPLE WHAT COULD WE BE IF WE OPENED OUR HEARTS OUR MINDS OUR EYES OUR SOULS Where Would We Be RisingFeelingBeingLight That World of Unconditional Grace If Only We Could Be Inside, How I Wish I Was Love, And Love Only The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ThenLoveBe And Love You Shall Be For In Your Words You Show Your Love AndInYourLove Shall Be Love For All excellent DreamSeeker. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Merci Many Thanks, A poem of this length, let alone the subjectivity it reeks of, I kow can be a difficult read indeed. Again My Thanks for your reading my Wrestliing with words, How I wish I could Convey. Still one tries to speak of that inside. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
quote: and quote: first, i think "Death In A Minor Key" would be a GREAT title for this.... second... you've blown me away with some of the images and phrasing .... excellent work (still don't get the initial caps, though... sorta makes it harder to read, but that's just me...)... i don't usually make comments about the structure of a poem or anything in Open forum but ... lol... i did!!! so oh well... forgive me... 'human dichotomy' indeed.... what a perpexing situation we all are in, huh? i truly am enjoying your writing....... [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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