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Dark Enchantress
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0 posted 2000-12-29 06:17 PM


In your heart I can't find my place
because my own heart
is ridden with painful mystery
I tell you that I love you
And you could be good for me
But my thrist for challenges
is never fullfilled by you
You're too ideal for me
I'm too dirty for you
But you love me anyway
So what game is this?
What truth have I missed?
I'm stuck in this space
but I can't tell you,
You think I love you too


I am no one if not myself.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~



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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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1 posted 2000-12-29 07:33 PM


hey you...
welcome back...
very cool to see your name again
powerful penning ...
well expressed emotions...
you have decribed the "yin-yang" feelings
we all experience in relationships
well done
take care and hope to see more from you.
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Sven
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2 posted 2000-12-29 08:32 PM


I hate that feeling. . . you've penned it very well. . .

great one, welcome back. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Dark Enchantress
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258
meet Morgana
3 posted 2000-12-30 12:44 PM


Thanks so much! It feels good to be posting again. I just wish I had better poems to show off! lol Oh well...so far so good, right?  

I am no one if not myself.

~*SeLf PrOcLaImEd FrEaK oF nAtUrE*~


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