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Masked Smile
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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Masked Smile smile masked my tearful eyes smile masked innermost pain smile without warmth inside smile act of a clown smile perfect mask for me broken behind my smile Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now what can this cowboy do for his friend to make her smile without the mask. I really liked the format of this one, but I don't like my friend hurting inside. Take care of you my friend. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very good Charisma! I know what you mean but it's wonderful how you admit it here and you're telling the truth and realizing these things happening shows the depth of the work! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Mark: thank you my dear cowboy, wish I could smile without a mask, hope that I can do that soon.....but well I think that I am born for that masked smile. ethome: thank you for your kind reply, feelings are my inspiration..... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ Honey, the warmth from your heart pours forth and settles in a smile on the face of a friend. And it's just going to bubble right back to you ... I can feel a smile from you RIGHT NOW ! *Grinning* with love for you, my friend. Well, if you can't find one - I've got a spare !  Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Charisma, at least you were a good shopper and bought some real pretty masks * wink * Don't worry, dear lady. You are in the right place for friendship and support and we're gonna chase those nasties right outta ya! You'll see  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
that sure is a pretty mask you are wearing now..HAPPY NEW YEAR HON..HUGS ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
take off that mask my friend. . . and let the real you shine through. . . I can already see her in this poem. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Charisma, I agree with Balladeer and all the rest above What is that old saying "Smile and the world smiles with you." Enjoyed the poem |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Charisma. There are seasons of rough times and they hurt. And it is hard to smile and go on with that despairing dead feeling deep inside. But....It is not forever and the outcome is a deeper love joy and compassion than you already exhibit, loving lady. I too feel this way that your poem expresses. as I try to hug you and comfort you with words over miles. if you need to talk a little , please do email me, My door is open and I listen well. I will be praying for you to be comforted. Aloha, my friend! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: you are unbelieveable my dear friend, and you are right, a smile is bubbling up now. thank you for your love...and warm friendship...Balladeer: oh my...glad to know that I have shop something good out there .... allready feeling better with such friendship around. Victoria: yeah smile is a pretty mask...but I have rather the smile inside me, that's what I am missing now.....and for you all the best wishes too. Sven: I will try to put of that mask....hope that I can will find myself pretty soon. Seymour: thank you for your kind words.....smiling is what I always do....even when I am down. and sometimes that old saying works, but not always my friend KoKo: you are a wonderful friend, thank you for your hugs and comfort...and I do know that there will come better day's......I do believe that too. Thank you all for your kind works, your friendship, comfort.....just when I need those warmth, to much happened in a short time for me.....and I wish that time will work it all out for me. wishing you all a wonderful and happy new year....may it be blessed with all the best, cause you all deserves only the best. |
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