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Is it Fate? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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You have been patient a very long time < !signature-->been waiting for me to make up my mind i try not to melt within warmth of your arms always taken with your cowboy charms you are the one i am committed today sharing secrets within sincere eyes blue gray when the snow melts i can hardly wait a ride upon your horse..i wonder.. is it fate? i listen by the firelight..your voice softly sings watch your fingers strum upon guitar strings if only i could stay but i always have to go back into the world.. a blanket of snow i want to snuggle forever upon your bearskin rug sincere kisses sweet words and your warm hugs i know you are waiting for the light in my eyes waiting for the day i bring that special surprise and say those three little words..i love you it will be the beginning..our debut A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
God, I love this place, ok, ok, you love the cowboy....who is Long John and oh, brohter, and who loves the flirt? I'm confused, I need to quit my day job and sign on for life. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i think you are talking about our cowboy mark haa...a different one haa..glad you love it here..i was away at christmas so just getting back into the swing of things..welcome to passions lana..  ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love new beginnings don't you? nice one, ~V~ huggzz ~Wynter glad to see you back... I missed you very much *S "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i missed you too hon..almost as much as him haa...HAPPY NEW YEAR..hugs.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Round'em up and bring him in! How can he resist a passionate love poem like that. Why, he could just simply bathe in the comfort of these words if nothing else...write'em up V. ethome |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
ha..thank you ethome ...hope you had a wonderful christmas...yes he loves my poems..as he writes too.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
seems to me that this cowboy has a lot in the pasture. . .  Great poem Victoria. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Evening Victoria, Now that is one lucky cowboy. H'mmm, I liked it, I liked it! BC |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I was going to make some comments on fate and destiny but we could be here forever so I'll just say Welcome back!"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now where's Janet Marie with her "rode hard and put away wet" comments? LOL! This is great, Victoria! May all your corrals be OK! You on a bearskin rug is a wonderful thought to keep me warm tonight! Lana,,,you CRACK ME UP!!!! What a welcome addition you are! Believe me, we ALL feel that way!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
sven..thank you so much ..nice to hear from you.. eddie..yes im sure you could ...nice to be back..have a wonderful new year eddie.. bill..so glad you like it bill..appreciate your comments tonight deery..you sound a little tipsy to me ha..just kidding ...i think  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
sure makes me wish I were a cowboy - loved this Victoria~S~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I love the sound and feel of love in the air. Bravo!!This was superb. Much love and New Years hugs from me to you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://www.voy.com/7622/ http://www.powerpoems.com |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
I love the picture you paint but only one thing please dont leave stay and enjoy the sweet fruit of love. Love and light, Richard |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Bill...well partner...doesnt mean you dont like cowgirls does it haa..being silly today wild bill haa.. startime..thank you so much and i hope you have a wonderful new year too ..HUGS Richard..thank you very much ...*blushing*  ha.. ~Victoria~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Well, I guess down in Texas you ain't got too much choice but to find a cowboy now do ya. Sounds as if that one of yours is about to get lassoed real good. Wonderful write my friend. ====== Sven--little note.....cowboys ride the range...it's the other things that fill up the pastures. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 12-31-2000).] |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i forgot you moved didnt you mark..not in texas anymore..im sure those cowgirls are missing you ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Victoria ... tender and sweet thoughts to melt a cowboy's heart, just lovely! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Some cowboys ride the range other cowboys will dance the night some cowboys may be strange other cowboys will be "just right" see the cowboy of your dreams may he give you twilight scenes... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you kit and sunshine...pleased you both enjoyed..nice to hear from you.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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