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As Rose Petals Fall "I Ask" (for Isis with love)
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As Rose Petals Fall "I Ask" (for Isis with love) |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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As Rose Petals Fall "I Ask" < !signature-->As Luna abates the winter solstice emanates with gentle radiance casting crystalline brilliance to nights inclement residue. Rose petals fall in tepid breeze as winters calling holds back for one last dance, daffodils and posies worthy of bouquets sway to and fro. Harmony and peace abide this picturesque moment as if knowing, time was coming to an end and true seasonal change would rule the land. One could find themselves rapt in awe, poised in wonderment, celebrating such a momentous theme inspirational in magnitude from these earthly delights that carelessly promote tranquillity’s healing powers to a weary soul. What captivating influences these earthy gifts have when given the opportunity to penetrate deeply with powers only Nature can provide. Why is it that we as humans fall short in memory to the powers of Nature when capsized in our own limited self, and fail to open up to that in which encompasses our whole essence? I merely rapt in “awe” poised in “wonderment” watching rose petals fall, ask myself why do I let the love for life pass by when I at this moment “see” such beauty so freely given and am asked “nothing” in return except to be merely thankful! By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Cerenity, what a stunning write for Isis, I'm sure she will love it.Being thankful is an important facet of life. write on, belong Keth Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Such expression and imagery you have penned! Isis will love this, it flows with eloquence like a dreamy song with a simple, yet important message at the end! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I LOVE THIS TO PIECES, YES, YES YES "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ This is just a gorgeous piece of writing. The imagery is stunning and the gesture is one of friendship. *Hugs* to you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for your kind replys to this poem, It was a morning of great beauty here and I found myself just wondering in thought and being thankful for all that I have, Isis has been of great help to me lately and I wanted to thank her for all she has done for me, thanks again. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Lana Member
since 2000-12-26
Posts 68 |
this IS great and I love roses....with jewelry and fine wine! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Beautiful Cerenity, I know that Lisa will love it. . . for it speaks of her wonderfully. . . Hugs to you my friend. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
This is simply awesome! Deb |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Everyone, Thank you so much for your kind replys, Love, Cerenity |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Cerenity thanks hon *hugs* I'm sure this is the most beautiful thing you have written to date, and I'm thrilled and honoured it is for me. My hand of friendship and caring will always be extended your way, you know I'm only an email away.. Love ya girl!! *huge hugs and thanks* Isis *The heart of education is the education of the heart...* ~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit. |
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