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Essencesofdreams
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0 posted 2000-12-29 01:48 AM


opening my eyes I realize Im on a cliff
the cliff is over looking the sea
I look closely and I see all my hopes and
dreams Hidden and Burried in the soft sand
and gentle waves


A soft voice in my head tells me to Jump into
my dreams and not to be frightend because
my dreams will lift me up and keep me alive.


I ask my self if I should go for my dreams
If I should Just dive in and go for it
with doubt in my mind I dive in
I fall gently and land In the cold water


looking around in my sea of dreams
I realize without those dreams My life
would be empty I would have no reason
to live.

I wake up to a whole new Out look on life
Feeling A scence of love for my dreams.I
secretly thank that little voice in my
head for telling me to go for it.

"Life with out dreams is no life at all"
                  unknown


© Copyright 2000 Erica Grover - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2000-12-29 01:55 AM


Nice poem! WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I can see the message displayed here..

LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR.

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-12-29 02:13 AM


EssenceOfDreams~
Welcome to Passions.
This is a nice entry poem.

Dreams are made for floating in~
Enjoy your splash.

You will enjoy your stay with us.
So get real comfy and enjoy reading and replying
to some of the poetry you'll find here.
Again, I welcome you.
~*Marge*~



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John R
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since 2000-12-14
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3 posted 2000-12-29 04:45 AM


If a dream touches you, it touches you as anything else which touches you.
nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2000-12-29 08:47 AM


dreams can become a reality...yet some are better left untouched

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Nan
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5 posted 2000-12-29 09:24 AM


Welcome to Passions, Essences... This is a lovely entree to our forums.  At first I thought your signature was a part of your poem, then looked again and figured it out... You can actually make your end quote a "signature" by going to the "members area" at the top of the screen and then into "edit your profile" - if you want it on all of your posts... Welcome again, and check your email for a special greeting...
VAS
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6 posted 2000-12-29 09:29 AM


Nice expansion on an old truth.  Dream, dream, let the dream catcher carry you to grand deeds.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2000-12-29 09:33 AM


Welcome to Passions! May you enjoy reading and posting and many, many new friends...
Lady Lightning
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8 posted 2000-12-29 09:40 AM


Welcome to Passions...What a great poem you have penned here..I think ~Wynter said exactly what I would have said...Yet we never want to stop being able to dream... Looking forward to more from you... ~LL~< !signature-->

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost.  author unknown

[This message has been edited by Lady Lightning (edited 12-29-2000).]

Sven
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9 posted 2000-12-29 09:32 PM


exactly what I would have done. . . just jumped right in. . .

wonderful poem. . . welcome to Passions my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Startime
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10 posted 2000-12-29 09:44 PM


*sigh* oh yes, dreams are very important and they can come true. Keep hope shinning for one never knows what the future will bring. Much love and New Years hug from me to you.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams.
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EagleOne
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11 posted 2000-12-29 10:29 PM


Your quote kind of says it all doesn't it? I like the way you have expressed your thoughts here. Well done and welcome!  

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.



BloomingRose
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12 posted 2000-12-29 10:37 PM


Welcome to Passions!
Dreams are what ideas are made of, and where hearts learn to hope.
Nice poem.
Deb

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13 posted 2000-12-29 11:10 PM


Dreams
Made Real
All Moments]
Palpitating One

You Receive
The Giving
All LivesSingWithin...


The Song That Is Soul
It Reaches Defiant
Giving It In And Given
Calling All Souls Rise


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