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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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He Wrote he wrote, once, for me a song, a lyric a melody he wrote once, then came to sing voice to ring inspiring he came and wrote a song for me lithesome, lovesome melody brought my sigh right along such was tender harmony made me feel as if I belonged so how can this bliss be remiss not, say I not at all and in his song the fever assails lifts me high and I sail I sail on sigh on high tonight to heaven 28 December 2000 |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Sunshine, whatever you're having....don't stop! Your words are magical tonight! MORE!!!  |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
OOOOO this is so wonderful. Romance seems to be in the air. Keep fling girl this is great. Much love to you from me. http://voy.com/7622/ http://powerpoems.com |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
LOL at 'Deer...sparkling water...and I've posted my three....so I will just have to ask you to check in tomorrow... Startime, thank you! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
"He wrote"...this feels so poignant to me. I would say..he painted..and I know the feeling. Your poetic style just gets more beautiful every day. Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sparkling water it is then for this poet. Absolutely beautiful my friend. Loved the flow and the format but mostly the message it sends out. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Sunshine, I'm still giggling at what Balladeer has said above... But it is true dear lady your poetry lately has such brillance of lustre in the expression you pen onto page and in the words of Kethry "WRITE ON"... Permit me to say, this is breathtaking and thanks sweetie for another sweet read this eve... Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 12-28-2000).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Cat, I've been written, painted and blessed by many of the poets here...perhaps it was just in the choice of a pen-name...thank you!... Mark, all poems should be replete in messages of the heart, should they not?...that, or a good giggle... Coco...isn't it fun when we can take a "serious" poem and get a giggle out of it...teaches us never to take things too seriously...thank you my dear, for reading... |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
not just to my 'treasure box' - but to a special place within on top! need I say more? |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Yeats, no, Sir. You need not say another word, but accept my smile, and my gratitude. Thank you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And what a song he must have written and sang to you in order to inspire you in such a wonderful manner...very nice indeed!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
surely though, the songs that he sings aren't nearly as wonderful as this. . . but I hope that he continues to inspire. . . wonderful from you. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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