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Lovers Lullaby
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Lovers Lullaby |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Lovers Lullaby I long for the warm evening dances in the darkness. The faint smell of sweat on my mind. The stillness of the room will be broken, By the whispers and moans of the dancers as they fly. The kisses are moist and so gentle, By a face that is rough against mine. Calloused fingers touch my back as he leads me Through steps we learned through time. New steps we try together To see if they satisfy. The music is breath and heart beat, A magic lullaby. Come to me and we will dance, Dance to the lovers lullaby. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wow...I hear the beat, and see the sway...this is wonderful! |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
WOW may I have this dance. I loved this. very romantic. Love and light, Richard |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Sunshine, thank you glad you enjoyed richard, yes you can have this dance ... giggle |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Cane feel the glide of your words as if steps in that dance. Great write Slick wonderful job Rich |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OOOOOHHHHHHHHHH WOW, I can't sit still reading this one, oh by goodness, golly....hmmmm hmmmm hmmmmmm all I can say is (not to you) to him..rock me baby!! thank you  [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-29-2000).] |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
It still makes me want to grow my beard again. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
And what a marvelous dance it is! very well pictured ...... enjoyable lighthearted read!! |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
One of my favorite....Bernie |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
OOOHHHH MY on bended knee may I have this dance. Loved it now I must say I need a cold shower. Love and light, Richard |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
THIS WAS VERY BEAUTIFUL. I REALLY ENJOYED IT. IT WAS DEEP AND THE WORDS JUST SEEMED TO HAVE A STEADY FLOW. CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF YOUR WORK. DYME NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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