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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-12-28 08:18 PM




Charismatic Charisma

in sight of a silver sliver of moon
I think of you
as you hang your charisma
for all to see

~ slightly influentially ~

and powerful in your
quiet roar
you feign some interest
and nothing more

except

thy forceful impact
of your thoughts
succumbs in their reign
as your words are read again
and again

as your entreaties
of appeal
beckon with
seductive zeal
and with crook
of charm compel
the strongest of
women to revel
in your read
and of your words
then read again
and wonder when
this vigorous force
will take it's course
directly into their heart

Ahhh….

thus, 'tis you. The upbeat stroke
that you provoke
of thy heart,
thy active stance
of promised romance
might one
simply take a chance
is heartily imparted.

thus,  'tis you.

Now while thee may
not be
glamour bound, but
sometimes clown,
it can be said
the potency in
which you wrap your
words, you see,
is the charismatic
chemistry
and thus
the ink of thee.

28 December 2000

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 12-28-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Sven
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1 posted 2000-12-28 08:20 PM


oh yes!!!

Perfect. . . just wonderful. . .

Have I said enough??  

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That which gives light must endure burning
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2 posted 2000-12-28 08:35 PM


Kari love, this is as always an absolutely wonderfully written piece. It is absolutely spot on. Utterly wonderful love it really and truly is.
Take care
                 Majestic Marsha
Oh and I love it I really do
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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3 posted 2000-12-28 08:59 PM


Allow me to agree with Sven......

it's excellent, sunshine

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4 posted 2000-12-28 10:01 PM


Sven, yes...

Marsha, dear, blame my muse...

'Deer, thank you...

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5 posted 2000-12-29 02:15 PM


oh my......never thought that I could be soooooo Charismatic...  

I have read this one several times, its so beautiful and I want to make a thread.

love it sunshine.

((hugs))
Charisma


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6 posted 2000-12-29 03:14 PM


Sis, boy did you catch Sven's bug in a big way!!! Beautiful soo beautiful.
write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


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7 posted 2000-12-29 05:23 PM


Charisma, I am SO glad you like this one...thank you...

Keth, I didn't know Sven was infectious...ahchoo!...excuse me!...LOL...

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8 posted 2000-12-29 07:44 PM


Karilea~
Charisma captured charmingly.
~*Marge*~


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