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“The Vow”
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“The Vow” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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I hold you in my heart, now and forever, from this day... All hell can freeze, before I’ll let our love be swept away... Against all odds, we’ve built a bridge, to span the oceans deep... To join our hearts in lover’s song, our melody to keep... No angry words, nor hateful deeds, will break the binding tie... I love you as in ancient times, and ‘til the day I die... Forever joined...in many lives, we’ve shared a special place... And in this life, our love transcends the bounds of time and space... So long ago, a promise made, between two loving hearts... Was strong enough to never die, but grow, where new life starts... One life into another... those two hearts reach out to touch... Each knowing that the other will be reaching just as much... So I promise, as I’ve promised, many times and many ways... Your love to keep and cherish, in this lifetime full of days... Many seasons pass before me, Love renews, as it does now... My heart will join with yours, As once again...We share... the Vow… Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful my sister and the power of love is bursting the seams in this one. This sounds like the renewal of wedding vows or just the pledging of two hearts and I truely hope that this is something that is finding YOU in it. Absolutely would be the best New Year's gift to see you this happy my sister. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: there will always be that one strong love of past, a bond never to be broken... well done Sunny... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ Yes....this was meant as a renewal, of a love that feels as though it has seen many lifetimes. I believe that there are loves so strong, that they do transcend the boundaries put on us by life itself. Thank you, my sweet brother...  ~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Oh, my friend...we are on the same wavelength so much of the time, that I feel as if I've known you a long time! 'Ancient' is the key, I think!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Oh Holy Cow I love this, I can see the two lovers now, hands across the ocean, finding one another......YES "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Kathleen.... Yes....I knew the romantic at heart would appreciate the thoughts of my wistfully inclined muse today! I'm so glad that you liked this one!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful. . . you knew that I would love this one didn't you Sunny???  -------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sven ~~~ Yes, my friend.....I was hoping that you would, as your opinion is in the top 10% in my eyes!! Thank you!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Special words, and they make me feel the mystical powers that make love carry us across miles, and through miracles, and into the arms of the one we have always known. Awesome poem, Sunny. S |
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