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I Almost Wrote A Poem.................

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SEA
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0 posted 12-28-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for SEA


I almost wrote a poem
to tell you of my life
what it's like for me
to be a mother.........a teacher.........a wife

~**~

I almost wrote a poem
to show another side of me
a spirit running wild
on the beaches of a stormy sea

~**~

I almost wrote a poem
to let you take a peek
deep inside my romantic heart
showing what makes my knees go weak

~**~

I almost  wrote a poem
of a rainy night spent by the fire
creating our own heat~
slowly spending our desire

~**~

I almost wrote a poem
of all the wicked things I'd like to do
if I could have just one hour
..........all alone with you  

~**~

I almost wrote a poem
about this obsession I've got
but I'm afraid for these blue pages
it would simply be too hot!  

~SEA~
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1 posted 12-28-2000 10:11 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You twisted it!
Well done!
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2 posted 12-28-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

You can send it though EMail ... LOL
Mark Bohannan
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Now I know where all those underwater eruptions come from. And to think that I thought they were underwater volcanoes.  One hour though???????????????????  Barely enough time to get started...me thinks a day is more like it.  Wonderful write and you always show a piece of you and what is in your heart whether you intend to or not my friend.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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4 posted 12-28-2000 10:25 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sunshine~  

Rex~ the E-mail police would get me! LOL  

Mark~ honey after just one hour, you'd be spent  .........uh oh.......I showed a piece of myself?!? opps.....what did you see?!!?  

-SEA
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Circe, this is as always a beautiful piece written with your elegance wit and skill. And as always I love it too.
Utterly delightful
Take care
                     Mushy
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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SEA~
Delightfully teasing.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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In the winds of Cherokee song


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My friend.......I was not talking about me.  I wouldn't even attempt to keep up with the passion that you hold for your husband.  What I saw was a very sweet friend giving me a smile today and those are cherished very deeply.  Thank you for that.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Marsha~ thank you for that sweetie!  

Marge~ teasing is fun   thanks!

Mark~ I was only playing with you.......... I hope I  didn't offend you........smiles are good and warm the heart, you give me lots of those!  

-SEA
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My friend, you should know by now that you could NEVER offend me.  I am flattered more than you could know but I also know reality and that is the wonderful love that I see you glow in everyday in your love of your husband.  Truely heaven sent and no-one can mess with that.  Now don't go getting shy on me......well not toooooooooo shy anyway.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Mark~ so I'll just bat my eyes, grin and blush like mad!   -SEA
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11 posted 12-28-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Loved this one!!
We'll wait for Part II
Liz
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your almost poem is more than enough ..
very cool twist Sea ...
good to see your name back here girlie
Happy New Year
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know
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Enjoy the read!!!!!!
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14 posted 12-28-2000 01:45 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

You almost wrote a poem?....I'd say you succeeded splendidly!! I enjoyed this very much, SEA!!

Denise
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I ALMOST didn't read it. But, I am glad that I did.
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16 posted 12-28-2000 02:36 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

oh my...thought I knew you a bit...but telling about the other side of you,  
now I am curious.....  
penned with a teasing touch....love it

((hugs))
Charisma
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LOL delightful read  
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18 posted 12-28-2000 02:59 PM       View Profile for LngJhnAg   Email LngJhnAg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LngJhnAg

Circe - Ignore these men - they cannot be trusted!  I am so thankful you wrote ME this poem.  It was wonderful.  What???  It wasn't???  hmmpphhhh....  The poem was OK, I guess.  lol
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Elizabeth~ thanks, but as for a part two, I have no idea what that would be!  

Janet~ thank you, being gone for a few days felt like MONTHS!!!  

Vandana~ I'm glad, thank you  

Denise~ thank you so much!  

Melton~ I'm glad you did too!  

Charisma~ what would you like to know?  

Beki~ thanks!  

LngJhnAg~ dear heart.......if I said I wrote it for you would you smile for me!?  

-SEA  (Circe)
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"I almost wrote a poem  
about this obsession I've got
but I'm afraid for these blue pages
it would simply be too hot!"

then simply enjoy it!!!!!!


"Every man dies.
Not every man truly lives."
Braveheart

   Kathleen





[This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 12-28-2000).]
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yeah...me too
 
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