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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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I came here for one reason only --talk away my life of lonely-- everything I'd done before? was just another memory's chore... Exciting tales, have I to tell, about the life I lived in Hell. Everything. Yes, everything. Always, ever, just a choice... and even as I stutter, speak? Is but a choke of my own voice. and every verse sounds like a spell, attempt, to break the binds of Hell... Loneliness must be the curse of ones who write poetic verse. Loneliness is too perverse-- a cursive script of heart reversed... my heart? Is but the dank ink well... I dip my quill and write of Hell. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
now this "speaks" very well written, serenity...some day I will be able to use that word easily...or maybe not  ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Whew, feeling some anger and pain in here, but how wonderfully you described it. You are a fantastic poet, and I hope happiness finds you in 2001. Sandra |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh...I understand. Wonderfully done!!!  |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
as long as we have the freedom to write we have one foot in heaven.... Every man dies. Not every man truly lives. Braveheart |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
You've penned this with an intensity I understand and appreciate Serenity ... powerfully written, in words I can relate to ... all too well. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and every verse sounds like a spell, attempt, to break the binds of Hell... Loneliness must be the curse of ones who write poetic verse. Loneliness is too perverse-- a cursive script of heart reversed... my heart? Is but the dank ink well... I dip my quill and write of Hell. ============= oh me twin...you KNOW this is a looking glass etched in gold ... God I love this poem and ya know what baby... somedays it tis a curse...and somedays it tis a gift and if ya think about it we will be in damn good company and it will be one hell of a party if even half the poets show up and you just keep dipping that quill of yours ... cause reading your heart is HEAVEN TO ME love ya me girlie me Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Passions Voice Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 291Michigan |
May I contribute to this book? Seems like we've all been there. Excellent poem. passion is life. . . ~Diana |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
Loneliness must be the curse of ones who write poetic verse. Loneliness is too perverse-- a cursive script of heart reversed If ever there was a verse that spoke to me with such depth and such pin point accuracy it is that verse, amazing poem, excellently written. I hope that the rays of hope and light fall on this hell. sending you hugs and my love.  "In the shadowplay, acting out your own death, knowing no more As the assassins all grouped in four lines, dancing on the floor" Joy division |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Sista! sheesh, powerfully intense hon. I loved it! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this wouldn't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh yes..I can relate on this one too...powerful words inhere. ((warm hugs)) Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Somehow? I knew you all would understand...and that does mean so much to me!!!! love to all and many hugs...and yep..smooches too! Thank you. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
excellent serenity. . . may I send you my guidebook?? --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven???? you've got a guidebook to hell? rofl...I am just trying to picture this---Sven giving the "walking" tour through hades...oh, gawd...rofl...love to my friend...just keeping myself amused. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Hi, welcome to Hades, I'm Sven, and I'd like to welcome you all to eternity. . . Now then, if you'll just follow me, and try to keep together, there are about a couple hundred thousand of you, so please. . . let's keep it moving. . . If you look to your left, you'll see a wonderful lava bust of our very own Satan, you'll be meeting him shortly. . . *fade out. . . *  LOL-------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
serenity, you came to the right place. We have a hell of a lot of helluva good poets here that you can write the hell out of....and I really like ya, for the hell of it! |
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