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maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
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0 posted 2000-12-27 09:25 PM



Never Before
By Richard Maxfield
12-27-2000

When you are close
Nothing else matters
I become lost in you

Your eyes looking
Into my very soul
I melt in your arms

Like an enchanting melody
Your female grace
Warms my heart

My spirit leaps upward
At your tender touch
Uncontrollable emotions rage

Like a flower needs the rain
Drawn like moth to flame
I seek you every moment

Words fall short
Actions seem not enough
To express my love

Never have I been taken
Never have I felt
As I do with you


© Copyright 2000 Richard Maxfield - All Rights Reserved
Lady Lightning
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since 2000-12-04
Posts 422
Kentucky
1 posted 2000-12-28 02:07 AM


Back out you go Richard...hehe..Cause you know I have to add this one to my library with all the others in my Richard file...  
I thought I could pick a fav verse with this one, but nope, I loved 'em all... ~LL~


The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2000-12-28 02:27 AM


Richard.......your love..... is lucky.....it's what we all want to hear......beautiful ......just beautiful.....1slick_lady
maxtec1
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since 2000-12-09
Posts 577
Garland, Tx
3 posted 2000-12-28 03:03 PM


Thank you two wonderful sweet Ladies for your comments.
Love and light,
Richard

Marsha
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England
4 posted 2000-12-28 03:27 PM


Richard, this is as always a beauty absolutely wonderful. Have a fabulous new year
Take care
                Mushy
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



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