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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Lost lost I am lost I am lost amiss all the chaos struggle I struggle to hold on to who I am to who I was and to who i shall become wrestling with myself finding finding a new life a new way a new direction foreboding anticipation and fear fill my heart choosing this time for no one but myself is weakness my enemy strength my friend journeys journeys down paths paths in the circle of life bringing us back to where we once were seeker seeker is what i am seeking the truth not in happiness yet in what makes us comfortable in who we are lost so, I am lost lost and seeking my way back to me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Journey is a path to ones self, You seem to have found that way. Rich |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Good poem. You will find your way if you search for faith to believe in who you are meant to be. Be true to yourself, and reach for hope. Deb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Lost---a thing that is unfound lost, a cry of silent sound.. lost is stillness of profound... Lost? A lucid thought's confound. grin...inspired me......hope you don't mind sharing? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
You'll have to go to the lost and found within yourself...it's there... and there's love on a shelf there that you can take down and give it to yourself...that's because you are reaching out to yourself and you did it in a very well written way....welcome to Passions!! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
rich, yes, i think i am on my way home BloomingRose, thanks i think now i am on the right path serenity, glad i inspired you & no i don't mind sharing......no wait.....depends on what i'm sharing ..giggle ethome, thanks for the warm welcome & yes i see the shelf with love on it & reaching for it |
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encre du coeur Junior Member
since 2000-12-24
Posts 15Florida |
If you struggle to hold onto the old you, how can you let the new you be free? Must we hold some of the past before we can 'be' the future? Interesting poem! I write with the ink of my heart. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno? no sharing necessary. The road is yours--here's the keys...now see what this baby can do...be careful love, the road is SLICK. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Time will take care of you.. I agree with Serenity, this was inspiring. You show promise.. keep posting.. oh yea Welcome to Passions!! LOVE IS GOD, LOVE IS WAR, LOVE IS WHAT YOUR LIFE IS FOR. |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
I really like your way of expressing yourself, simple and clear and very honest, thanks a lot |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a map really isn't needed. . . you know the way. . . great poem. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
you have found your way........ bernie |
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