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Saxoness
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0 posted 2000-12-26 10:46 PM


I've found you out
without a doubt
I know that it's you,
you can't hide, you two.

The poems passed between,
you thought had gone unseen.
But now I know,
'cause you let it show
and I've spilled the beans...
no more secrets it seems.

You know who you are,
the sneaking didn't go far.
I won't reveal names,
to ruin all the games,
But I had to reveal your fling,
even if it's a deeper thing.

Yes I've found you out
without the tiniest of doubt.
So I'll be watching you,
and you know it's true
because well, I think it's sweet,
and I hope you eventually meet,
so I can say
on that day
I knew all along,
and I was never wrong.

(To any one who may take this seriously, please don't! I haven't REALLY found anything out, lol, this is just a joke between friends. So no worries)


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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."
                                




[This message has been edited by Saxoness (edited 12-27-2000).]

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catalinamoon
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1 posted 2000-12-26 11:19 PM


OK, who is having a romance without telling me???
Cute poem, anyway, Saxoness, and good luck to the couple in question.
Sandra

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2 posted 2000-12-26 11:22 PM


*giggling with delight* it isn't hard at all to know the couple this is written to. I can see that wishes do come true, turning dreams into reality. I wish them both all the happiness true love can offer. Well done, dear one. Much love to you from me.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. http://path2riches.com


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3 posted 2000-12-27 01:04 AM


Ok, who's been spreading rumors about her and I again.... damn and I thought nobody was watching...  

oh, you don't mean me.... ok, forget what I said....  

cute poem... but I bet you don't know who she is..... na na nana na....lol

Parker

Saxoness
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4 posted 2000-12-27 11:04 AM


Hee hee hee I have a feeling that this will nail SEVERAL couples on PiP lol

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Lana
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5 posted 2000-12-27 11:12 AM


I thought this was a friendly place for poetry, I'm beginning to wonder, is it or not?  Is any thing I post (and I'm new here) going to be scrutinize...jeez, I get enough of that sh......in real life....

I'll be reading and waiting before I post anything under a microscope.

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6 posted 2000-12-27 11:18 AM


Very cute! Although I don't have a clue, I'll be keeping an eye out!!

Denise

Saxoness
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7 posted 2000-12-27 11:31 AM


Lana, I got your email and emailed you back, hopefully that will answer some of your questions.

Denise, lol thanks, you do that and see what you find! Isn't it exciting?  


"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

kaile
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8 posted 2000-12-27 11:38 AM


i dont know the couple myself but like denise, will be playing detective...

though i wish the best of luck to those two lovebirds

LngJhnAg
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9 posted 2000-12-27 11:58 AM


Saxon lady

You are a Detective Emeritus indeed!  Who else could have guessed that Balla loves Deer? Especially when one of them is too drunk to care how the other one looks!  

Nan
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10 posted 2000-12-27 12:43 PM


This is very cute - and very enjoyable for its poetic ambience... It no doubt describes MANY a Passionate Poetic Pair...

I'll do just that, though... I'll enjoy it for itself... and I'll let those "pairs" remain unseen... When and if they choose to announce their friendships to us, I'll heartily cheer them on. If they prefer privacy, they'll have my understanding and respect...

'Tis a cute poem...

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11 posted 2000-12-27 01:02 PM


great poem!!!

LOL    

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Saxoness
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12 posted 2000-12-27 06:03 PM


kaile, I wish them luck too *grin*

Sailor, uh oh, I'm tellin! You weren't supposed to say any names! lol good one.

Nan, of course we'll let them remain! Whats the fun in spoiling the surprise for everyone? Yeah this is just a little bit of fun on my part, glad you liked it!

Sven, thanks! It's not a literary masterpiece, lol, just a bit of lighthearted fun



"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

doreen peri
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13 posted 2000-12-27 06:27 PM


cute!



BUT....shhhhhhhhhh.....
i don't want to know!
ROFL


Kit McCallum
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14 posted 2000-12-27 06:54 PM


LOL ... a good guessing game Saxoness, enjoyed both the poem and the mystery!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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15 posted 2000-12-27 07:31 PM


I nearly skipped this one, but curiosity got the best of me. I don't pay close attention to such, as in who's who, etc. Not having a lot of time online, and there is so much good poetry to read! (love it).
I still say, this is a cute poem full of good rhyme.
Deb

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16 posted 2000-12-27 08:29 PM


cute, sorry I misunderstood earlier, I guess I'm new, no one takes this stuff seriously!
Love it

Saxoness
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17 posted 2000-12-27 11:57 PM


lol thanks ya'll, it's nice sometimes to just have a bit of fun  

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

dgvarner
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18 posted 2000-12-28 04:19 PM


jeez..did love puppy get out and about again...i keep tellin him to lay low....(he thinks no ones watchin....teehee)

LOL!  very cute sax  

hugs, g< !signature-->

"the beginning of wisdom is, 'i do not know'"  
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Saxoness
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19 posted 2000-12-29 01:53 AM


lol Thank you, thank you.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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20 posted 2000-12-29 02:12 AM


Saxoness? It's like the mafia...the less ya know? the safer you are...grins and winks!
VAS
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21 posted 2000-12-29 02:44 AM


Goodness!  I can't believe how much banter you got even after your disclaimer.  Surely when you say it's just a joke and that you don't know anything...oops, you said you 'didn't find out anything' that you mean what you say, right?

Certainly a piece that created less peace and many queries. ;o}

Saxoness
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22 posted 2000-12-29 04:15 PM


'renity, I know! I keep tellin 'em I dunno anything...and yet I still think I'm being followed lol

VAS, lol, I have trouble remembering my name sometimes, I don't have time to truly play dectective.


"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

Lana
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23 posted 2000-12-29 04:18 PM


listen honey, at first I didn't know what this forum was all about. You know, I've only been reading for a week and I've already paired up about oh, a dozen or so folks!
Just kidding.  But you have to be careful with words, because NOT knowing is more dangerous than knowing, know what I mean.

You're a cute kid, you didn't mean any harm.....

Saxoness
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24 posted 2001-02-22 11:32 PM


lol thanks once again all for the replies.

"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

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