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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-12-26 06:51 PM



Hold Back The Day

Touches that incite my heart to hammer hard against my breast
Your breath as soft as starlight whispers against my heaving chest
Lying within this your charmed and magic world I want to stay
My return to the madness and the reality I wish I could delay
The flame of your passion is fiery, igniting me with burning sighs
The sound of your pleasure has tears of wonder glazing my eyes
But to lie here with your heat and your thighs pressed against me
This is a delight and a marvel that I wish could always ever be

Here with love and you I could stay for an eternity never to leave
While my spirit merged with yours and my breasts began to heave
I'd stay in this lovers' tangle rocked to the depths of my very heart
Passion would call us commanding us to once again take her part
And among the stars we'd dip and waltz throughout all eternity
Forever the ecstasy would delight as you make beautiful love to me
We could frolic in the rainbows and shower in loves golden rain
And eat and drink ambrosia before we start loves waltz over again

Please hold the day back a little longer, tell the sun not yet to rise
I want to lay here an eternity forever communing with your eyes
Tell the world to stop turning and make time itself stand quite still
For then will I feast at loves banquet, all my dreams to finally fulfill
I don't ask for much just to hold this hour until the end of my days
Because I couldn't be happier while within your arms love just stays
The day calls me to return, to run once more in its wretched race
I will, but place a kiss here within my heart so I can stand this pace


Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



© Copyright 2000 Marsha Grace Melody Todd - All Rights Reserved
maxtec1
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1 posted 2000-12-26 07:03 PM


Gee your poems are always so soft and loving. ~~Big Sigh~~
Love and light,
Richard

Sven
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2 posted 2000-12-26 07:35 PM


*sigh*

Marsha. . . you know, I could read these forever. . .  

wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Lady Lightning
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3 posted 2000-12-26 09:01 PM


I am so quickly running out of words to describe the feelings I get when I read your work..   Have I used the "Warm Fuzzies" yet??  hehe    Loved this, as you know...   ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown

peppermint35
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4 posted 2000-12-27 02:01 AM


Warm and loving.....a sigh of completion, the feeling of being home   Love it!!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

tracie66
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5 posted 2000-12-27 02:04 AM


MM~
Devine piece from you....truly a beautiful read ((sigh))
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Marsha
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6 posted 2000-12-27 01:12 PM


Richard, thank you very muchly, I do appreciate it.
Take care
               Mushy
                  
Sven, that is one of the nicest compliments I've heard. Thank you so much
Take care
                Mushy
                    
LL, you are far too sweet to me love, I thank you so very much. You give me the warm fuzzies  
Take care
              Mushy
                  
Pepper, thank you a feeling of completion, that sounds so right. Thank you again
Take care
               Mushy
                  
Tracie, you always say the sweetest things and are far too generous with your praise
take care
                Mushy
                    
Have a fabulous New Year Everyone
                    
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning




[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-27-2000).]

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