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I'll Be Your Wave On The Water (Whenever)

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Marsha
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0 posted 12-26-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha


I'll Be Your Wave On The Water

Whenever the sun has hidden herself from your eyes
And your heart and soul are heaving weary sad sighs
When you feel like you should just give up all hope
And the world seems too hard and you just can't cope
If your dreams are too far away for them to come true
And all around seems dreary and your soul feels blue

I'll be your wave on the water I'll be the surf on your sea
I'll be your sigh in the wind I'll be the breeze in your tree
I'll be your sanctuary and when you need help call for me

Whenever the stars seem to go misty and appear far away
And your head doesn't hear what your heart has to say
When the colours have left the rainbow turning it grey
And the music you hear doesn't make you want to sway
If the moon doesn't cast just for you her special glow
And you don't feel your passion and love ebb and flow

I'll be your beat in the heart I'll be the flow of hot desire
I'll be your touch of love I'll be your flickering flame of fire
I'll be your kiss which takes me higher and then higher

When the world seems to be turning it's back on you
And the people you trusted have all left you alone too
When black clouds come and the storm rages overhead
And the lightening flashes and you think that love is dead
When the gift of love you hold out gets trampled underfoot
And the clean winters scene becomes dirty and covered in soot

I'll be your sun in the sky I'll be the birds soaring so high
I'll be your hearts kiss I'll be the spirit within the sigh
I'll be your spirit reaching out for those stars in the sky


Marsha



Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning






[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-27-2000).]
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 12-26-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose

This has the flow of a heartbeat, can't get much better than that!

"Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell."
Joan Crawford
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2 posted 12-26-2000 08:31 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Kathleen, thank you love, that's the nicest thing I've heard today.
Take care
              Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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Mushy,
I do believe you've written this to the beat of my heart, and Kathleen is right, it can't get much better than that.
Write on, with song
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.

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Kethry love, thank you muchly, its my pleasure and wonder that these are recieved with such warmth. I'm doing my post Christmas cheer, and I'm glad it helps.
Take care love
                 Slushy Mushy
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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Marsha! This absolutely sings!  Run this out and get it published...this soars!  Thank goodness I've built all of those annexes on to my library...a special room for Marsha's work certainly!...hugs to you!
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Kari love, Thank you very muchly. I'll be the wind beneath the wings.
And you know how much I appreciate you reading this
take care
              Majestic Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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~I'll be your hearts kiss, I'll be the spirit within your sigh~


Marsha,
This is a lovely poem, telling of a desire to be there for that special someone.
I liked it much.
Deb
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Very good writing my dear. This shows what a big heart you have.
Love and light,
Richard
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And still another...lol..I'm gonna have to start on that new addition to the library right away...   Thank you "Mushy" .. ~LL~

The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown
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MM~
Beautiful thoughts sweetie, lovely piece of poetry so very tenderly written
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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Deb, thank you so much this was written as a special addition to the Phoenix poems. They are written for special people, as are all here at Passions.
Take care
                Mushy
                  
Richard love, did you like it that much love? I'm pleased. And I thank you very muchly
Take care
                  Mushy
                      
LL, Oh love, you don't know how much it means to me, and I thank you lots
Take care
                   Mushy
                      
Tracie, you always say such nice things about me love. And I thank you
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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Marsha~ this is simply perfect!   -SEA
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Marsha~
Utterly amazing are these thoughts -

'I'll be your wave on the water I'll be the surf on your sea
I'll be your sigh in the wind I'll be the breeze in your tree'


You blow easily through our minds and hearts with lovely verse.
~*Marge*~


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I'll be your wave on the water I'll be the surf on your sea
I'll be your sigh in the wind I'll be the breeze in your tree
I'll be your sanctuary and when you need help call for me

Whenever the stars seem to go misty and appear far away
And your head doesn't hear what your heart has to say
When the colours have left the rainbow turning it grey
And the music you hear doesn't make you want to sway
If the moon doesn't cast just for you her special glow
And you don't feel your passion and love ebb and flow

I'll be your beat in the heart I'll be the flow of hot desire
I'll be your touch of love I'll be your flickering flame of fire
I'll be your kiss which takes me higher and then higher

=================
this is one of your best Marsha ...
so sincere and love and passion filled
a wonderful dedication of heart thru poetry
lovely sentiments, beautiful verses
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know
Mark Bohannan
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Now I have a favorite of yours for sure.  You have gone beyond the reaches of earthly love in this piece and empowered it with all the powers of the world.  What a beautifully and superb poem my friend.  I am truely impressed with this piece in many many ways and instead of pointing out a single verse or line I will simply tell you that I loved the whole write.  I applaud your growth in this one thunderously.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
author unknown

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Circe love, thank you so muchly, I must admit that this series of poems I've worked on. I know it makes a change   I can't thank the poetry fairy for these, they are me. So I truly do thank you.
(Now you know how I spent the Christmas period   I was at work, you surely didn't expect me to break a sweat.   )
Take care kid
                 Mushy
                    
Margie girl, thank you so very muchly, I can't tell you how much that means to me.
I do so value your praise, and the time you take to reply to my and others poetry. Thank you love.
Take care
                Mushy
                  
Janet Marie, You know I don't deserve that compliment, not at all. I can see that I am only beginning to uncover some of the mysteries. But I shall never be anything more than average, comparisons are invidious but they are also inevitable, and I know, none better, the very long way I have to go.
For you to say this is my best yet, makes my heart smile, and in a way my spirits sink, I wonder just how awful my pervious efforts have been. I take the compliment because I know you mean it sweetly, and for that I thank you sincerely.
Take care sweetie
                  Mushy
Mark my very dear friend, I can't thank you enough, but again it is a compliment that I know I do not deserve and never will.
Although it is so tempting to grab the praise and run, and you don't know how tempting. I feel a bit like Cinderella, hopelessly outclassed, outranked, and know that come midnight I shall turn back into one of the common herd.
I do thank you tremendously
Take care
                  Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


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precious write
 
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