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I'll Be Your Wave On The Water (Whenever)
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I'll Be Your Wave On The Water (Whenever) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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I'll Be Your Wave On The Water Whenever the sun has hidden herself from your eyes And your heart and soul are heaving weary sad sighs When you feel like you should just give up all hope And the world seems too hard and you just can't cope If your dreams are too far away for them to come true And all around seems dreary and your soul feels blue I'll be your wave on the water I'll be the surf on your sea I'll be your sigh in the wind I'll be the breeze in your tree I'll be your sanctuary and when you need help call for me Whenever the stars seem to go misty and appear far away And your head doesn't hear what your heart has to say When the colours have left the rainbow turning it grey And the music you hear doesn't make you want to sway If the moon doesn't cast just for you her special glow And you don't feel your passion and love ebb and flow I'll be your beat in the heart I'll be the flow of hot desire I'll be your touch of love I'll be your flickering flame of fire I'll be your kiss which takes me higher and then higher When the world seems to be turning it's back on you And the people you trusted have all left you alone too When black clouds come and the storm rages overhead And the lightening flashes and you think that love is dead When the gift of love you hold out gets trampled underfoot And the clean winters scene becomes dirty and covered in soot I'll be your sun in the sky I'll be the birds soaring so high I'll be your hearts kiss I'll be the spirit within the sigh I'll be your spirit reaching out for those stars in the sky Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-27-2000).] |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This has the flow of a heartbeat, can't get much better than that! "Love is a fire. But whether it is going to warm your hearth or burn down your house, you can never tell." Joan Crawford |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kathleen, thank you love, that's the nicest thing I've heard today. Take care Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, I do believe you've written this to the beat of my heart, and Kathleen is right, it can't get much better than that. Write on, with song Kethry Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry love, thank you muchly, its my pleasure and wonder that these are recieved with such warmth. I'm doing my post Christmas cheer, and I'm glad it helps. Take care love Slushy Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha! This absolutely sings! Run this out and get it published...this soars! Thank goodness I've built all of those annexes on to my library...a special room for Marsha's work certainly!...hugs to you! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, Thank you very muchly. I'll be the wind beneath the wings. And you know how much I appreciate you reading this take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
~I'll be your hearts kiss, I'll be the spirit within your sigh~ Marsha, This is a lovely poem, telling of a desire to be there for that special someone. I liked it much. Deb |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Very good writing my dear. This shows what a big heart you have. Love and light, Richard |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
And still another...lol..I'm gonna have to start on that new addition to the library right away... Thank you "Mushy" .. ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
MM~ Beautiful thoughts sweetie, lovely piece of poetry so very tenderly written ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Deb, thank you so much this was written as a special addition to the Phoenix poems. They are written for special people, as are all here at Passions. Take care Mushy Richard love, did you like it that much love? I'm pleased. And I thank you very muchly Take care Mushy LL, Oh love, you don't know how much it means to me, and I thank you lots Take care Mushy Tracie, you always say such nice things about me love. And I thank you Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ this is simply perfect! -SEA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Utterly amazing are these thoughts - 'I'll be your wave on the water I'll be the surf on your sea I'll be your sigh in the wind I'll be the breeze in your tree' You blow easily through our minds and hearts with lovely verse. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll be your wave on the water I'll be the surf on your sea I'll be your sigh in the wind I'll be the breeze in your tree I'll be your sanctuary and when you need help call for me Whenever the stars seem to go misty and appear far away And your head doesn't hear what your heart has to say When the colours have left the rainbow turning it grey And the music you hear doesn't make you want to sway If the moon doesn't cast just for you her special glow And you don't feel your passion and love ebb and flow I'll be your beat in the heart I'll be the flow of hot desire I'll be your touch of love I'll be your flickering flame of fire I'll be your kiss which takes me higher and then higher ================= this is one of your best Marsha ... so sincere and love and passion filled a wonderful dedication of heart thru poetry lovely sentiments, beautiful verses jm Some people find subtlety in strangers if you find anything~let me in Your eyes~you see everything my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Now I have a favorite of yours for sure. You have gone beyond the reaches of earthly love in this piece and empowered it with all the powers of the world. What a beautifully and superb poem my friend. I am truely impressed with this piece in many many ways and instead of pointing out a single verse or line I will simply tell you that I loved the whole write. I applaud your growth in this one thunderously. A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses. author unknown |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe love, thank you so muchly, I must admit that this series of poems I've worked on. I know it makes a change I can't thank the poetry fairy for these, they are me. So I truly do thank you.(Now you know how I spent the Christmas period I was at work, you surely didn't expect me to break a sweat. )Take care kid Mushy Margie girl, thank you so very muchly, I can't tell you how much that means to me. I do so value your praise, and the time you take to reply to my and others poetry. Thank you love. Take care Mushy Janet Marie, You know I don't deserve that compliment, not at all. I can see that I am only beginning to uncover some of the mysteries. But I shall never be anything more than average, comparisons are invidious but they are also inevitable, and I know, none better, the very long way I have to go. For you to say this is my best yet, makes my heart smile, and in a way my spirits sink, I wonder just how awful my pervious efforts have been. I take the compliment because I know you mean it sweetly, and for that I thank you sincerely. Take care sweetie Mushy Mark my very dear friend, I can't thank you enough, but again it is a compliment that I know I do not deserve and never will. Although it is so tempting to grab the praise and run, and you don't know how tempting. I feel a bit like Cinderella, hopelessly outclassed, outranked, and know that come midnight I shall turn back into one of the common herd. I do thank you tremendously Take care Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
precious write |
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