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vandana
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since 1999-10-22
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0 posted 2000-12-25 12:23 PM



It Is only way
To start our love,
There are days,
To start with It,
It Is only begining,
But,
I hope,
It won't end
like this forever,
There are days
To shine our dreams away,
It Is only begining
It Is only way to start
And show our feelings
to eachother,
If we have to start
brand new day
with the love
We have,
I won't take It,
seriously anymore
Because
It Is only
The begining
Our love just begin,
So why are we waiting for?
Our love just begin
Our dreams just begin
to shine the light away,
It's only begining.....

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2000-12-25 01:45 PM


Vandana and you are only beginning to come into your own as a poet. Good write.
Be well
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2000-12-25 06:56 PM


Vandana, Love will always prevail! Peace be with you, my love
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-12-25 07:15 PM


The beginning of a new love for you and the beginning for us to enjoy as your poetry grows.  Wonderful my friend.  So very nice to finally have the time to read and catch up on all the wonderful poetry I have missed.

A life with love will have some thorns, but a life without love will have no roses.
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Sven
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since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-12-30 12:27 PM


I love your beginnings my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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