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Bilal
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since 2000-12-13
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0 posted 2000-12-25 02:44 AM


LAMINATION  
Lancelot {Bilal} © 2000

Pain & discrimination
Slavery & domination

No prayers & all damnation
No tolerance and all extortion

Invalid execution
A tough equation

Just a speculation
And no confirmation

Family separation
Child deportation

Forced salutation
Begged inhalation

Cars with acceleration
Hearts with deceleration

Judgement day imitation
All away with examination

Hate cultivation
Filled with hallucination

Its all just mechanization
Brains without organization

Told to be given stabilization
But nothing but temptation

Child labor utilization
For poor its a limitation

Moms for optimization
Dads with rationalization

Siblings for nationalization
Foes for internationalization

No hope for neutralization
People wanting lionization

Whole world a bad nation
The end could be salvation !!



© Copyright 2000 Bilal - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-12-25 04:06 AM


All very true sad to say.......
wonderful creation
within industrialization!

Really enjoyed!

Mistletoe Angel
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Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2000-12-25 09:32 AM


I remember this one very well, this is a powerful poem! It is sad to see how the world can be shed over by this ludicrousy, but salvation can follow if we all work together. Thank you for sharing, soulbrother!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Sincerely,
Noah Eaton

Bilal
Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66

3 posted 2000-12-25 01:45 PM


Thank you very much for commenting and may you have a merry christmas.
Bilal

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
4 posted 2000-12-26 11:39 AM


Bilal,
no more machination
you have won high station
with your compilation
to show your situation
And every busy nation
will bow to new damnation
while wishing for flotation
a way to change desolation
for miracles still wait on
the coming of the great one
Keth



Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


Bilal
Member
since 2000-12-13
Posts 66

5 posted 2000-12-26 05:31 PM


Thanx for the beautiful comments Kethry and yes world is waiting for the great one and Allah would send him down when the time is right.
Bilal

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