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lingering...(of love's regret....)

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serenity blaze
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0 posted 12-24-2000 03:12 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for serenity blaze

A simple drive
I pass the house
and see a tomb of family
each planting
Every
willow tree—
each shadow that might
whisper "me",
ghostly girl,
She’s beckoning—
Jumping rope
within her hand…

No one is home.
I am alone.
My simple door is locked.
I glance upon
my naked wrist
accursed of no clock…

Oh my fingers of duress
against the winter’s pane, I press,
and cry in smell
of famine’s feast,
one more bone?
I taunt, the beast….

Granted,
you?
and all,
you do--
I duck, I dance, I pirouhette--
Slanted,
NEW
With all?
I DO.
I duck, I dance, in silhouette…

Every shadow,
mimics me---
in love with you,
the tide of sea...
Each shell? She
washes back to me--
a lingering, of love's regret.

Prints of foot
upon the sand
Easy word
to understand
and everything
I was before?
Leads me here,
To one child’s door—

Every breath
breathed unto you?
Every, each,
un-colored, hue...
I could not be here as before—
Love you,
Love you,
Love you….more…




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ethome
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1 posted 12-24-2000 04:01 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Well done Celeste! Wonderful writing of soul filled reflections! Have a nice holiday...ethome
Janet Marie
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2 posted 12-24-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Every shadow,
mimics me---
in love with you,
the tide of sea...
Each shell? She
washes back to me--
a lingering, of love's regret.

Prints of foot
upon the sand
Easy word
to understand
and everything
I was before?
Leads me here,
To one child’s door—

Every breath
breathed unto you?
Every, each,
un-colored, hue...
I could not be here as before—
Love you,
Love you,
Love you….more…
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OHHOWILOVEWHENYOUWRITELIKETHIS  
me twin...I swear I can eat your rhyme with a golden spoon...
I love when you do your repetative lines and wrap them in your smooth as butter rhymes.
this is enchanting sen...and beautiful and now its in my treasure chest of you.
love ya me lovely poet of the south
me


Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know
Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
Posts 18986


3 posted 06-13-2004 01:54 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Doing the birthday bump from me library of rhyme divine Sen keepers.
Its your day..the forums shall be your marquee
Enchantress
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since 08-14-2001
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Somewhere in time~


4 posted 06-13-2004 04:45 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

I'm so pleased JM broutght this back up...
I wasn't a member then...and ..well...
I sure did miss a lot...
Lady you sure can write!!!!!!!
 
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