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Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware

0 posted 2000-12-23 05:00 PM



A tender touch, you awake in me
Your passion communicating,

The vision of your eyes
Touching me
The auditory substance of your throat
Speaking my name
The sensation of your breath
Flowing over my skin

All these and more
The warmth of your body
Next to mine
Your lips kissing
Holding me in your arms
All so sensual
Drinking
Dining
Body wine-ing

We two, moving
Moving,
In rhythm

Dance of Love




Great souls have wills; feeble ones have only wishes.

~ Chinese Proverb ~


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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-12-23 05:02 PM


...and the music plays on...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2000-12-23 05:06 PM


Wil,
I would reverse roles with you anyday, you seem to have such a loverly time and then you write so well about it.  

write on
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.


inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-12-23 05:41 PM


Beautiful, a dance of love. What more could a woman ask for? I feel the New Year is going to be very good to you.
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2000-12-23 06:44 PM


"Body wine-ing"  Now I like that thought.

Good piece WY.

jwesley

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
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Wilmington, Delaware
5 posted 2000-12-23 10:21 PM


Karilea-
I'm listening - I love to dance     Thank you

Kethry-
who could refuse such an offer?   Thanks

inot2B-
2001? - we'll see - I hope so - thank you  

JW-
I went thru a few translations before coming to that   - Thanks

[This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 12-24-2000).]

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
6 posted 2000-12-24 04:56 PM


Very lovely thoughts from you Bill...such a lucky lady she is
Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-12-24 06:13 PM


Speaking my name
The sensation of your breath
Flowing over my skin

All these and more
The warmth of your body
Next to mine
Your lips kissing
Holding me in your arms
All so sensual
Drinking
Dining
Body wine-ing

We two, moving
Moving,
In rhythm
=================
im so digging your rhythm ...
poetically speaking of course *smile*
love when ya write like this my sensual poet-gator ...
like the premise of this... perfect title
later-now your cooking with gas-gator lol
jm

Some people find subtlety in strangers
if you find anything~let me in
Your eyes~you see everything
my eyes~I see it all together now~and I know

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
8 posted 2000-12-27 02:16 AM


Paula - Janet Marie -
My love keeps me inspired - and if that weren't enough - your words are Gas poured on the fire

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