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Balladeer
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0 posted 12-23-2000 04:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer


Please know that I am there with you
In everything you do
All burdens I will bear with you
Until each day is through.

I'm in the faces that you see
I'm in the morning sun
Of all the blooms upon your sill
I'm there in every one.

Please know how much I think of you
As your day goes along
I teeter on the brink of you
Please let this make you strong.

You're in the rain that gently falls
You're in the morning dew.
When strangers smile and say hello
I know that they are you.

You are the breakfast that I eat
You're in my morning mail
Should some small act make my lips smile
You did it, without fail.

Your road goes right and mine goes left
No reason to pretend
But who's to say they will not meet
Somewhere around the bend?

Until that time I'm there for you
As you are here for me
Please take how much I care for you
And use it lovingly.

Dear, take these thoughts I share with you
In deep sincerity
For I am always there with you
And you are here with me.

© Copyright 2000 Michael Mack - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 12-23-2000 04:52 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

'Deer,
well are you named, your music lives and breathes.

I was gonna say something about you being a ham and that making you a part of your breakfast, but this piece is just too beautiful.
Be wel, do tell
Kethry


Religion is for people frightened about going to hell - Spirituality is for people who have been there. Anon.



[This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 12-23-2000).]
Charisma
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2 posted 12-23-2000 04:53 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

wonderful.....simply wonderful...have not the right words to describe how I love this one...but I know that this is a keeper.
thanks for sharing.

((hugs))
Charisma
Kit McCallum
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3 posted 12-23-2000 05:01 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"Your road goes right and mine goes left
No reason to pretend
But who's to say they will not meet
Somewhere around the bend?"

"Until that time I'm there for you
As you are here for me
Please take how much I care for you
And use it lovingly."

Now Michael ... just how often can we take all these words that make our hearts simply swoon?  

Forever, LOL! Wonderful Michael, your heart is in a beautiful place right now, and it just shows through these incredible poems. Beautiful!  

Happy Holidays and Best wishes,
/Kit
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4 posted 12-23-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

'Deer...new lights gleam and are gleaned through your words of care and concern for your friend[s]...I know there cannot be just one, for you are, Sir, a giver to all...and this of course will strike all hearts of the men and women who read this...

the cadence rings and sings...this is lovely...and I have to agree, it is a keeper...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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5 posted 12-23-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

Excellent - top drawer - one of your very best - (I'm creating an acronym :IWIHWTM for "I wish I had written this myself") so when you see it (as now) you'll know I'm giving you the highest compliment I can bestow.
KokoStewartKoomoa
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6 posted 12-23-2000 05:32 PM       View Profile for KokoStewartKoomoa   Email KokoStewartKoomoa   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit KokoStewartKoomoa's Home Page   View IP for KokoStewartKoomoa

this is extremely wonderful. It flows so smoothly and the rhyme  scheme is perfect. The sentiments are outstanding. Thanks for sharing such a lovely work!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


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7 posted 12-23-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Kethry...you may refer to me as a ham any time....just don't expect me to bring home the bacon  

Charisma....thank you for keeping me  

Kit..thank you! Yes, my heart is well located..not necessarily the rest of me!!   Thank you, my friend...

sunshine...yes, a giver to all I try to be and all may use my thoughts in their best interests..I am just a poet, I  suppose...

Bill...THFYKT....thank you for your kind thoughts     

koko...thank you!! I appreciate comments on the structure and flow very much!  



[This message has been edited by Balladeer (edited 12-23-2000).]
jwesley
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8 posted 12-23-2000 06:21 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

I think the knowledge of your being 'there' has long since been known, but it's always nice to refresh the idea, isn't it?  Well done Mr. B.


jwesley
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9 posted 12-23-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

'Deer, ahh now this fills me with a warm and wondrous glow. I really like this, it's one of those really special ones. A keeper definitely, and a very pleasing thought to finish my day off. (Not that I have finished my day yet, but only another couple of hours or so, and I can drag myself off home.)
Delightful and terrific writing.  
Take care
               Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


Irish Rose
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10 posted 12-23-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Irish Rose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Irish Rose


Has anyone told you what a fine poet you are?
This is lovely, the words are beautiful...these words are alive and give hope to anyone who feels lost in a crowd and alone. Merry Christmas Michael!!!!!!

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh


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11 posted 12-23-2000 06:56 PM       View Profile for inot2B   Email inot2B   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inot2B

Oh come on, life is too short. Make those roads meet, and do it soon!!!!!!! Remember Toerag and LngJhnAg are coming around the corner trying to change her mind.

serenity blaze
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12 posted 12-23-2000 09:29 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

How do you do this?????

One beautiful poem after another...and all the ladies sigh!!!

This is quite elegant, and a wonderful Christmas gift for someone....lucky lady!
Hugs for Christmas, 'deer!!!
doreen peri
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13 posted 12-23-2000 09:36 PM       View Profile for doreen peri   Email doreen peri   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for doreen peri

beautiful writing, Michael!!!!
yes, i know you are and so am i and i thought of this tonight when i was bringing the groceries in, wishing i could be cooking you christmas eve dinner

....*sigh*....

LOL... do you believe that?...
hmmmmm.... well.... why not?
life is short as ms inot2b says

er, i mean, wishing i could be cooking christmas dinner for
all the special poetpeople
including you...
ROFL


but geez... this is just the internet
and boy do we all love poetry, y'know?
especially yours!!!!

this is an EXCELLENT poem, sweet Michael....
and i thank you for posting it because
knowing that someone is there for you is
very special, indeed....

Merry Christmas!!!my 'Deer man...
i hope you find everything you wanted
underneath the tree!!!
(((hug)))
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14 posted 12-23-2000 09:37 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

You really are exceptional with words Bal  

HUSG

Merry Christmas
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15 posted 08-24-2003 01:01 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Needs a repost...
latearrival
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16 posted 08-19-2006 05:47 AM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

time for a trip to the top! love this one. martyjo
 
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